First off, thank you for taking the time to read this and even more so for review. I did some research on firecrackers and a few other things but I really couldn't find much on the subject.
I see your point in the other areas as well and maybe after I finish my other WIP's I'll go back to this and do a rewrite to try and fix the errors in it. Thanks so much.
I like the idea of Watson reverting back to soldier mode and it being so jarring for Holmes. I think he moved convincingly from annoyance at losing sight of his prey to concern for his friend.
arkady had some very constructive ideas for you about the 4th of July. Perhaps a Guy Fawkes celebration would be a better fit? I believe that they use fireworks for that though I too am not British.
Could you tell me if this is supposed to be the movie or Arthur Conan Doyle version?
Oh Guy Fawkes, thats brillant! I'll have to rewrite this and change the night. I'm with you, I'm a American so it Guy Fawkes night didn't even occure to me (then again I didn't know about it at the time). And yes, it was 09'movie verse.
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I see your point in the other areas as well and maybe after I finish my other WIP's I'll go back to this and do a rewrite to try and fix the errors in it. Thanks so much.
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arkady had some very constructive ideas for you about the 4th of July. Perhaps a Guy Fawkes celebration would be a better fit? I believe that they use fireworks for that though I too am not British.
Could you tell me if this is supposed to be the movie or Arthur Conan Doyle version?
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Thanks for the review.
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