Special thanks to my sister's slutty friends for inspiration

[blank0_nin0]

The sun was shining off of the golden arches that stood tall about 20 feet from the window i was looking out of. Mcdonalds food always makes me feel awful, but i felt my stomach conspiring to commit a coup against my nervous system. Fuck it, i needed the energy. The day was gorgeous; it was about 70 degrees with no humidity, and a nice breeze

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[wickedawesome86]

Not that you'll want to hear it from me, not that you'd think I read your entry,not that you're expecting a kind word from me but...you're a talented writer. The subject is overtly sexual and the language is vulgar, but that's what makes the piece more honest, more genuine. You have a very commanding writing style, one that demands attention from the reader and that's quite impressive. Forgetting the constant thought in my head that screamed "I shouldn't be reading this," I consider what you wrote to be a worthwhile piece, which is a compliment considering the shit the pollutes the internet and bookstores alike nowadays. Kudos.
And now for the cliche:
Hope you're having a good summer, hope everying is going and continues to go well for you.
~Audrey

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[blank0_nin0]

thanks, you just made my night. seriosuly.