FIC: Come a Horseman (2/4)

[blankversesfic]

Title: Come a Horseman (2/4)
Author: blankversesfic
Rating: Overall NC-17, this part marked for language
Pairing: Sam/Dean, OMC/OFC
Warning: Violence, language, slash, wincest, misappropriation of apocalyptic materials. Split between crackery and angst.
Word Count: 5900
Notes: For the sammessiah Anti-Christmas extravaganza, written for caimenae. I hope you like it!

Comments

[aislinn_tredor]

lol. Dude. Jordan has got to be the most likeable OC I've ever read. Thank you so much for that, that boy is rocking my world. Ohhh the sarcasm! It's killing me softly. I love.

And asking Sam is he's boning his brother, and how he just blurts it all out: "I had this really, really weird dream and you were in it and your, uh, your brother was in it, and then, uh, you were kind of in your brother --”

*giggle*

He's such a fun character!

[blankversesfic]

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking him so much, part of why I keep adding chapters to this fic is that I keep stretching scenes because he's so much fun to write. *grins* I'm just happy other people than just me are enjoying him.

[green_grrl]

*flail* This continues to WIN!!!!!!!!! You could write 80 bajillion parts and I'd want them all! Except I want them all now, so. :-)

[blankversesfic]

*grins* I'm having a blast wrting this, so you'll get more parts soon.

[soxykitty]

Oh man I am loving this fic! :oD

[blankversesfic]

Thanks, hon.

[dreamlittleyo]

Ooh, part 2! (And there is a part 3 to come soon then, yes? *grabby hands*) This line just about killed me, the easy moment of revelation that it is: Sam, in addition to being the antichrist, had either been fucking his brother or had really, really wanted to. Well put! Loved Plague flipping Jordan off from the backyard. Looking forward to more of this!

[blankversesfic]

Plague's a smart-ass. *grins* Part three to come soon.

[ex_rosegany]

Yay, more horsemen! The humor was great again - I love how Jordan takes everything in stride, and actually ends up helping Sam deal, in a way...

“And Plague?” Sam asked, trying to look serious. “He’s an asshole?”

“He’s a self-satisfied little prick, is what he is.”

Sam stared at him for a moment, then threw is head back and laughed. It was a reassuring sound, that laugh -- it was Sam’s normal laugh, the one that he gave when something he had heard surprised the humor out of him. Even though he knew that is was a good sign, it still pissed Jordan off that Sam had the balls to stand there and laugh at him after everything that had happened that day.

“What?” Jordan scowled. “What’s so god-damned funny?”

“You, dude,” Sam said still laughing. “You’re, like, picking favourites out of the fucking horsemen.”

“Don’t laugh at me! The dude’s a little bitch!” That only served to make Sam laugh harder. “Fine! Whatever! Laugh it up, Damian! Forgive me for expressing an opinion on the personalities of our uninvited guests!”*dies* Jordan is

[blankversesfic]

Thanks! I think that after everything he's been through, Sam needs someone who is willing to at least work to accept him -- all the baggage included, and Jordan's in a position where he's willing to give it his all to try to understand. And yeah, his being a smart-ass himself about it is more helpful to Sam than any drawn out heart to hearts would be.

And you have strong powers of prediction, I must say. *grins*

[billysgirl5]

Great job! I'm really enjoying this story. I love how you are portraying the horsemen. I'm guessing we're gonna get one horseman per chapter? Loved the fact that Jordan was "sucked" into Sam's dream/memory of him and Dean...can I get sucked into that dream, too? :)