FIC: There Should have Been (1/1)

Sep 11, 2008 21:58

Title: There Should have Been, 1/1
Author: blankversesfic
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Warnings: none save wincest
Summary: it should have been harder

There Should have Been )

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hoveringon September 12 2008, 17:42:46 UTC
So Gorgeous! <3

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blankversesfic September 14 2008, 03:02:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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runedgirl September 13 2008, 02:20:48 UTC
Beautifully done, I love the unstoppable urgency of it, the sense of moving forward no matter what, without anything to stop or slow them down -- whether they should have been or not. The repetition of the theme really works well here too. Nicely done :)

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blankversesfic September 14 2008, 03:03:36 UTC
Thank you! I was a little worried that I overused the theme a bit, but I'm glad that you think it worked.

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a_dean_girl September 13 2008, 03:10:26 UTC
Really great. I love the rhythm, the gradual slide as they become one in every way. Thanks for sharing it with us :)

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blankversesfic September 14 2008, 03:03:59 UTC
You're most welcome! Thanks so much for the feedback.

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albeitslowly September 13 2008, 03:13:58 UTC
Ooh, this is gorgeous. I just adore it. And this layout makes me all schmoopy feeling. I think I'll just set up a chair over there in the corner, kthx.

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blankversesfic September 14 2008, 03:05:24 UTC
Thanks! The background pic is from a trip to St. Thomas this past January for a wedding. Our villa -- which we got *really* cheap for the week, was named the Maison Flamboyant, which I thought was awesome. *grins*

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spiniform September 20 2008, 13:20:17 UTC
That is just incredible! It's odd to see this pairing written without a huge freakout involved, but you really pulled it off awesomely.

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blankversesfic September 20 2008, 22:19:00 UTC
Thank you!

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