It's been a while . . .

[blazedd]

titled: "the boy-who died-was shut up"
alternatively titled: "undated- number 02"The boy-who died-was shut up in a cold, unforgiving cell by his captors. Burdensome locks and chains bound him to the cracked floor: they refused to release him; there was no escape, not the slightest possibility. He knew nothing of the illimitable feeling of freedom

Comments

[topanga1121]

I read this before while you were still working on it. It's well-written and there's a lot of symbolism here, but the sad thing is that these very kinds of things happen in the world everyday... not always in the literal sense, but even that way too. I wonder what things happen to the writer who even imagines these things enough to put them into words.

[mando_commando]

i don't really know what to say. very well written. i think it will stick in my memory for a long time. like that story where everyone had to be equal. the man... and the woman... and they were killed...

at least you have a way to release a little of what's inside of you.

i don't ever bother trying to write because i'm afraid it will just be stupid. if i ever try i'll let you know. i'd like to see what someone with talent had to say.