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[geofount]

Title:: A Carnal Game
Written For: yamikinoko
Requested Pairing: Byakuya/Yourichi
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,800
Summary: She runs and he chases. That's the game they play.

I'm not sure if this is what you wanted but I couldn't imagine them having a uhh...really healthy relationship considering their age differences. Sorry!

Comments

[shalinilahiri]

Oh, I really liked this story a lot. Simple, elegant use of words to bring out Byakuya's emotions (if he has any). Great job!

[bunnisteffi]

It was written so... so altogether-ly! I'm glad that you had added the last part, or there wouldn't be a pleasant conclusion to this fic. I can't believe this is under flashfics; The pairing and the going-ons in the story's really possible.

He will never break a rule again. But he had, hadn't he? Twice more, while he'd intended to stop at 3. If they really had something together in the past, it seems that Byakuya conveniently remembered his hatred for Yoruichi only for Rukia's execution, using the 'I made a promise to my honoured parents' excuse to cover it up.

Heh. Crack. Once more, good job!

Bunnisteffi

[shinebunny]

Such pretty writing. *_* I like the way you portray this pairing. And I like the way these two lines mirror one another(“Yoruichi must have loved Urahara very much.” and “You must hate me very much.” ), even if it wasn't intentional.

I didn't even realize you wrote it til I looked up to see who had such a lovely style. xD I should have known.