Concrit Monday: "Through Commercial Eyes"

[slipstreme]

A/N: This is a futuristic real world AU, that was brought on by me wondering about how many of us would love to have a copy of our favorite characters or at least know them in real life. Not all of the fandoms represented in the story do I really care about, but were rather what popped into my head as characters were needed. Random OCs are random

Comments

[gypsygrrl420]

Post this. NOW!

It's a fantastic premise, and you do it justice. I loved every single word in it.

I'm not trying to merely fangirl here, but what you asked for--the concrit you asked for--well, I have to say this is a solid little one-shot, and I love it. Lol, I know it isn't helpful, but if it's not Broke, don't fix it.

[slipstreme]

Where would I post it though?

For instance, if I post it to Bleach-gen, would it get rejected for the sexual content in it? Yet I don't think there is enough content for it to be posted to Bleach-yaoi, since the relationships aren't the main focus of the story, enough so I probably won't even put in tags for any other Bleach characters on my page except the main.

I'm thinking on putting it in Kurosaki-clinic though. They seem pretty open to anything.

[gypsygrrl420]

I think it would be fine to post on Bleach gen, because the sexual content isn't blatant. In fact, if one wasn't looking for it, one could easily miss it altogether.
Kurosaki-clinic would work well too. As for anywhere else, well, I'm not really familiar with comms for the Espada.

[slipstreme]

The arrancar groups, at least the ones I am part of seem to be close to dead unfortunately. I'm still going to give it to the Ulquiorra-fc at least.

[xglimpsex]

I most definitely agree. The content of this is perfect.

As far as posting, I think you could post to Bleach_Gen since the ship isn't the primary concern of the piece. It's about the character being used for sex, and it's very brief. Perhaps warn for brief non-descriptive sex?

You could also post this to all_for_bleach, and I can even see it going over well at bleachedblackk due to it's darker undertones.

[slipstreme]

Thanks! I thought about bleachedblackk. I think I am a member of all-for-Bleach.

Though when you crosspost, do you crosspost over time, a few here and there or all at once? I have noticed a lot of people apologize for flooding the members' inbox. I think the most I have ever crossposted was three locations.

[xglimpsex]

I always post all at once, so my flists just get it over with. I do apologize when I do this, but I figure it's better than spacing them out and annoying people over time...

Haha.