Comments | bled_raincloud: I'd trade forever to just hear you say the sound of my name,

bled_raincloud

I'd trade forever to just hear you say the sound of my name,

Apr 11, 2005 15:48

Queer

Sins like rain wet your dress
Against your skin it starts to press
Weighing down a burden so great
And putrid stench from all the hate
So black my eyes and call me crazy
You'd do something about me if weren’t so damn lazy
Just prance around in your blue and yellow
A Woman a fellow you still wear pink
To make us think you’re so cool
I have ( Read more... )

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dippystick April 11 2005, 22:28:45 UTC

-claps- :)

bled_raincloud April 12 2005, 19:23:48 UTC

Thanks ^_^

Hello. menchi_mel April 11 2005, 22:52:49 UTC

Yay! A poet... I like to write poems. ^_^
Well done that ones kool. :)

Mel xxx

Re: Hello. bled_raincloud April 11 2005, 23:09:01 UTC

It's me, Jeff. Silly... I made a new LJ just for poems ^_^

Re: Hello. menchi_mel April 12 2005, 09:11:54 UTC

oooooh :$
how was i to know?

mel xxx

rabbit_hop April 12 2005, 02:42:13 UTC

I really like this one. You're a very great poet.

bled_raincloud April 12 2005, 19:24:03 UTC

-hug- thank ya

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racebitten1 April 12 2005, 14:45:53 UTC

hey nice poem, one pointer.
You are downloading that pic from absolute punk place, and its taking their bandwidth, they could slap a nice fine on you for that, and i would hate to see it happen.
So best thing i can tell you is save the background in a file on your comp, go to www.imageshack.com, host it, and go from there.
I just dont want ya paying 500$ for no reason.
Once again, good poem

bled_raincloud April 12 2005, 19:23:05 UTC

Danke Sir ^_^

bled_raincloud April 12 2005, 19:24:41 UTC

Thanks and the background is Armor For Sleep.. I got the cd yesterday

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