Ahaha, second chapter uploaded a month to the day after the first. =P Anyway, nice move, turning the 'morning after' (so to speak) into a largely comic scene. The differential was a hilarious move~! Also, I really like the way you write House. And... the last scene... just worked. There's no other way to say it. <3 Haha, and you were afraid of being out of character when you first started writing them! xD You've really got a hang of the characters.
Icon love~ x] The month difference is due to the fact that I only finished this chapter up after that last person commented. I had up to the "Shit, that was low" part written then I abandoned it, then I finished it up. I first imagined doing it one way where Taub gives in, but I forgot what I was gonna write and spent a few days afterwards trying to think of something that would fit. x]
I'm still nervous about the characterization, but that's just my personality, nothing I'm going into lol. Especially House x] I rewrote the deathcat line three times before even settling on that idea. x]
So yes, thanks for commenting again! I always love receiving your feedback. I still haven't bothered planning this one yet lol x] Procrastination, it kills me. Oh, and long reply is long lol
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The month difference is due to the fact that I only finished this chapter up after that last person commented. I had up to the "Shit, that was low" part written then I abandoned it, then I finished it up. I first imagined doing it one way where Taub gives in, but I forgot what I was gonna write and spent a few days afterwards trying to think of something that would fit. x]
I'm still nervous about the characterization, but that's just my personality, nothing I'm going into lol. Especially House x] I rewrote the deathcat line three times before even settling on that idea. x]
So yes, thanks for commenting again! I always love receiving your feedback. I still haven't bothered planning this one yet lol x] Procrastination, it kills me. Oh, and long reply is long lol
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