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bleufleur

All the Difference - Chapter Six

Feb 13, 2011 21:56

Chapter Summary: A decision is made. In order to forge new bonds, sometimes old ones must be broken. Exactly how will Fuji's choice affect the other members of the Seigaku tennis club? The time has come to reveal to them what their tensai has been up to.

Chapter Six: Resignation

( Chapter Six Author's Notes: )

all the difference

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bleufleur February 19 2011, 15:22:44 UTC

Thanks for the feedback, as always ( ... )

perkyandproud March 13 2011, 12:23:51 UTC

Heh...they're teenagers, melodrama is just a natural part of their life ;-) Except those two are the least melodramatic I can think of...which is why the balance you struck worked for me!

I live in the Pacific NW...there are people here who wear shorts and t-shirts when it reaches 50 degrees out, so winter uniforms without coats for teenage boys sounds quite believable.

Momo's ankle. Hm...maybe he was off it for a week meaning completely off and then was on light usage? Or it was more of a strain, which some call a sprain 'cause people understand sprains easier than strains! :-) I think Konomi-sensei uses the time honored writer's tool known as Handwavium every so once in a while ;-)

...and considering what we've seen Ryuzaki wearing when she's not in her jogging outfit...I think the school insisted she wear it ;-) Or maybe she only changes out of it for classes because it is so comfy?

bleufleur March 18 2011, 00:36:24 UTC

Glad the balance worked for you! I was happy with how it turned out, too.

I live in the South. It has been well over 50 degrees here for a few weeks, which is why I had so much trouble remembering that the characters should be a lot colder in February in Tokyo than it was outside my window.

I just smile and nod whenever there's a tennis injury in PoT/SPoT because no one ever needs as long as they should to recover from an injury/illness.

Good point about Ryuzaki. The jogging suit might be the best alternative.

Thanks for your comments!

perkyandproud March 18 2011, 00:46:38 UTC

Handwavium is an important asset in any writer's tool box :-) I wonder how long Atobe's ankle will take to heal in SPoT (I always think of Shinji when I see that!)

I love commenting...hard part is knowing when to stop... *grin*