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blindbandit

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Jan 17, 2007 19:57

( The final chapter in the Firebender Toph story. )

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leavemea_lone January 18 2007, 03:01:02 UTC

((Didn't feel rushed to me! I really liked it. "chucko" eheh 8D Good ending line *thumbs up*))

blindbandit January 18 2007, 03:06:43 UTC

((Thanks. :D I probably would have expanded more on her change of heart if I was more motivated, but I just wanted to get passed that part, honestly. That's the part that I feel is rushed.))

leavemea_lone January 18 2007, 03:08:25 UTC

((Ah, I see. It comes across alright if you consider how unhappy she was in the Fire Nation's bosom from the beginning bits of the story.))

blindbandit January 18 2007, 03:14:53 UTC

((Yeah, I guess so. My ultimate fear was just making it seem like she's going "OH HEY THESE PEOPLE ARE OKAY EVEN THOUGH I'VE ONLY KNOWN THEM FOR LIKE TWO MINUTES". But really, when you're a kid, it doesn't take a whole lot to change your mind about something. So I use that as an excuse!))

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blindbandit January 18 2007, 20:25:36 UTC

Thanks! I actually got that idea from a comment lookout_wendel made, so I have her to thank for where the plot went.