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[blindmonk13]

What if each star in the sky was a tear
from the moon?
then one would think...
why is the moon crying?
does the moon miss the sun?
what if the moon was God?
would the tears be from
our mistakes?
or do i gaze to much apon the sky?

Comments

[plasticmonkey]

Hee hee, reminds me of Majora's Mask.

Nice poem. (yes, I actually read the whole thing)

Cept, (as I'm sure you know ^_~) it should be "upon the sky". Really, though. It's nice. I like it. Maybe it should also be "then one would wonder..." I dunno. IT just sounds better.

[blindmonk13]

yea i cant spell and i tend to use wonder a bit to much so i try and not over use it but thanks