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bling_chullie

If You Are With Me [SiChul]

Jan 29, 2012 10:46

Title: If You Are With Me
Pairing: SiChul
Rating: Nc-17
Warning: Smut, use of toys
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except of the plot that doesn't exist in here.
Summary: HeeChul hates being ordered around, especially by LeeTeuk because he knows that SiWon would follow their leader's orders and it annoyed HeeChul if he wasn't the one to demand.
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heechul, sichul, siwon, super junior

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phuheechul January 29 2012, 12:49:59 UTC

Hee hee hee
gaeteuk you can't separate two love birds away!! ：)
so hot smut scene!!!!!
cute ending,
thank for the fanfic!!!!

bling_chullie January 29 2012, 15:12:31 UTC

thank you :) do you think it was good?

phuheechul January 29 2012, 16:27:54 UTC

It is good!!! great!!!
i really love mothery teukie!!!
really love how they ended in bed!!!! hot smut scene!!!
i am grinning when reading ur fic!!!

bling_chullie January 29 2012, 16:55:56 UTC

Okay, thank you. I'm just not confident with this, because it's the first time I wrote smut with toys and so on. And I'm usually not good with smut, that's why I asked...I kinda don't have that much confidence with this...^^

rawrrrstar January 29 2012, 15:19:00 UTC

OMG I LOVED IT!!! *A*
SICHUL SMUT IS SIMPLY THE BEST. <333
Thank you Thank you for making my day <333

i love you and your fics <33333

*hug u very tight*

bling_chullie January 29 2012, 15:41:58 UTC

thank you, but be honest, do you really like it? I feel kinda afraid I forgot something important in there or it's simply just too bad...

rawrrrstar January 29 2012, 15:57:16 UTC

right. i don't like it, i love it more than i even should. <33
Use of toys is really sexy, and honestly i'm the type of person who loves these types of more extreme things like what siwon did.
I'm not that confident of writing such on my own, but i love reading these type of fics. Maybe i'm just too of a pervert or sadist for liking pain a bit~hahaha >////w////<
You really write exactly what my mind wants. I really missed these type of fics. <3

bling_chullie January 29 2012, 16:02:35 UTC

you know what, i understand you, probably more than i should...^^
because, actually, im just the same. i, as you can see/read in my fics, like sadistic things probably a little bit too much as well....not that im a sadist now though. but i wanted to read something like this for so long, but no one writes it >.< so i finally did, but im not confident with these kind of things either, that's why im asking. i really don't feel confident at all, but i wanted to read something like that for so long now...well, i hope it's not that horrible...^^ but i should stick to lower ratings, i guess, for im not that good in smut...*sigh*
lol, yeah, i can read your mind!!! :D

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fidomom January 30 2012, 03:14:14 UTC

THIS is for me? Wow. You nailed everything I like! I got me some smut and some fluff and Heechul being Heechul and Siwon being a brat and even some humor too when Teukie saw the used toys! I LOL'd @his "clean now!" And of course that Sichul romantic interaction - omg they are soooo in love! Loved this! I came close to keyboard smashing and I am much too old for that! :D (42). Memming this one. ♥

Huge hugs! Thank-you so much for such a wonderful birthday fic! \o/ ^_^

FYI: The address below is my go to resource for when I feel uncertain about male/male sex facts when I write smut (since I am a woman and quite straight, lol). I especially like browsing through his question and answer section. Found out lots of useful details/things I never even thought of wondering about, lol. The guy who writes it is actually a gay man. Hope it could come in handy for you, also, to increase your confidence. =) I know you're young for this info, but if you're gonna write smut anyway might as well be well informed, right? >.<

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bling_chullie January 30 2012, 21:50:10 UTC

:D THANK YOU~~~<3
I'm so relieved and happy you enjoyed it any loved it like it was ^^ Thank you really much. It means a lot to me, making you happy with this, especially because it is for your b-day :)

Lol, that would help :D Thank you a lot. And...ugh, seriously, no one cares for the age anyway. If there stands it's not intended for people under 18 or whatever, do you think they care and stop then?! xD I'm not the only one. Okay...well, I should write less smut though...and read less smut...uh, that will be hard xD Anyway, honestly, I really should stick to my saying, hm? ^^
But thank you for the information. I'll check the site soon...I though of now, after answering you, but I just realized that it's already late and I have school the next day and my parents are very strict, especially when it comes to the time when I should be in bed and sleep xD Well, still thank you a lot :D <3

undeadvampire February 12 2012, 17:30:28 UTC

It was really good ^^ I had a good laugh at the end, I must say. I'm sorry for that I didn't had time to read it before, but now I have, and it was really good ^^ Thanks for being so good at writing, it's perfect! :D

bling_chullie February 12 2012, 18:18:34 UTC

oh, thank you a lot :D
no need to apologize. i just told you to read it while you had no time and you were already pressured, so im sorry. and im really happy you read it now, but im sorry. you shouldn't have needed to...
but don't say all these things. im not that good in writing. i really am not ^^

undeadvampire February 13 2012, 14:39:56 UTC

Well, I do want to read what you do!! :) Even though I haven't much time, but I really want to, and you DO write well!! I love your stories, and I wish that I could read even more!!

bling_chullie February 13 2012, 20:07:11 UTC

Ah, don't worry. It's okay. I'm happy like this, for seeing a comment, it's okay, really :)
Thank you <3

jasmin0304 February 13 2012, 19:39:47 UTC

You write a lot of NC-17 these days, maybe you're in some kind of smutty mood ^^ (I am too, but only in my head, I haven't written them down)

Risky-sex is always exiting ;P

bling_chullie February 13 2012, 20:12:03 UTC

Hm, donno? It mostly are presents for friends :D And if they enjoy smut, I write some for them ^^ Concerning me, no, I'm really in a smutty mood. I don't know. I'm kinda too moody and confused and whatever right now. A little bit difficult to tell what's in my mind ^^
How about you? What do you enjoy?
Your b-day is soon as well, right? I saw it on your profile and I need to know early, otherwise I won't finish it in time. At least not these days. I'm so not concentrated...*sigh* So just tell me what you prefer, okay? You can also tell me if anything special should be in the fic. Just say something. Which pairing, just say. Otherwise, I'll think something up and I'm not sure if you'll like it then...So just talk, okay? :D I'll try my best then ^_^

Lol, sure, especially if it's SiChul :D

Thanks a lot for reading <3

jasmin0304 February 14 2012, 16:23:18 UTC

Do you let your IRL friends read them too? Just wondering... :P
What do you mean about enjoy; like in smut or just genre?
You mean like a b-day-fic-present-thing? *jumping up and down of happiness* It's so hard to choose when people ask me what I want. I don't know what to answer this time either... But some SiChul is welcome ^^
Don't stress yourself, right? :)

bling_chullie February 14 2012, 16:58:18 UTC

Lol, nope. At least not this. I have not really friends who like K-pop. My close friends tolerate it, but aren't interested. But sometimes, I edit my fics with a lower rating and use my friends names and give them stories as their b-day gifts :) But I usually change the plot a little bit as well. And I write in my own language then ^^
What about you?
I mean genre :)
And yep, exactly like that :) I hope I can make you happy then ^_^
SiChul is perfect ^^ I think I'm best in writing SiChul...?
Just tell me if you want something special in there. I don't know you well enough yet to know what you prefer to read, so I have to ask. Sorry... :)

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