other than the spelling errors and other such things undoubtably caused by your lack of sleep ::glare:: you have no need to worry. it's coming along beautifully. :)
I want to know about the dream! And I'm going to call you, so you're going to be forced to tell me! Mwahaha...
And I'm going to give a bit of constructive criticism... Lots of dialogue in this one. I'm liking that! I'd like to hear a bit more description of scenery. It seemed to me like when you were writing this one, you had the image in your head, and though you can describe it, it's more like you're telling than showing me. (It's those damn editor instincts kicking in... I'm not sure where they came from! Maybe it's a Nicol[l]e thing..:P hehehe..)
Then again, I'm rather tired at the moment myself, and have been writing nonsense for a good part of the night... Talk at you later, babe!
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And I'm going to give a bit of constructive criticism...
Lots of dialogue in this one. I'm liking that!
I'd like to hear a bit more description of scenery. It seemed to me like when you were writing this one, you had the image in your head, and though you can describe it, it's more like you're telling than showing me.
(It's those damn editor instincts kicking in... I'm not sure where they came from! Maybe it's a Nicol[l]e thing..:P hehehe..)
Then again, I'm rather tired at the moment myself, and have been writing nonsense for a good part of the night... Talk at you later, babe!
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