It's (Not) Over, Say Goodbye for oberyns

[mangafanxd]

Title: It's (Not) Over, Say Goodbye
For: oberyns
Pairing: Kyung/Zico
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1600
Summary: Park Kyung was never good at making friends, so why did he think the end of the world would change that?
Notes: Thanks to the Tooth Fairy for all the updates and frustration. For my recipient, thank you for big ideas and room to play in.

Comments

[teddyescher]

SCREAMS FOR EIGHT MILLION YEARS this is oberyns by the way I'LL BE BACK IN THE MORNING TO HEAP EIGHT MILLION YEARS WORTH OF LOVE ONTO THIS

I'M SO EMOTIONS ZIKYUNG

[teddyescher]

oh my god oh my god oh my god okay so first off you wrote this????? this really amazing story and wow this was so good jesus omfg

i really liked the beginning interactions and how they just sort of went all the way till the end also your kyung??? your kyung i really liked that he was layered in a sense and screams okay so uh i don't know what to say i'm gonna end up quoting the entire thing but just know that i really!!!! i really enjoyed this and i really liked it A LO T

"It's nothing personal," Kyung said. [...] And that was when he thought maybe it should be personal.
oh my go d

"How long until you like me?"
oh my god jiho you cocky shit

Kyung thought that maybe Jiho was the sun. He shone like the medals on the General's jacket, gold and honorable. Kyung maybe could be the moon then. Another face of existence, reflecting what it could to shed some light when the darkness came.
ooooooooooh man i really liked this a lot i like how you compared and contrasted them so nicely

"Fuck, the General is your dad."
fu ck
"Just push the

[maudlinsky]

I want to preface this comment with an apology for the length and general flow of the fic. I had lots of ideas (in my mind, they were awesome...), but I always got to this part where like 90% of the whole bit was gonna be the setting and the whys and the whatnots. I wanted this to be beautiful interaction between two cool dudes. Also, I didn't add in the notes which prompt I used in case it came out warbled and warped. So, for whatever mess I made, I'm sorry

[remplissant]

THIS FIC IS REALLY, REALLY... /BREATHES HEAVILY/

like, idk, for some reason it kind of reminded me of evangelion (just a bit, like, not a ton or anything!!) ((and maybe it wasn't inspired by it bc omg in my head only anime exists these days)) but if for some reason you were inspired by it at all YOU HAVE MY LOVE forever. i liked their interactions a lot a lot a lot. like, how cocky jiho is at first and how kyung kinda resents him bc kyung is kyung and kyung is kinda a brat (((sometimes))). this is a really flaily comment, i'm sorry, but i just really enjoyed this even if it's kind of short. it's kind of like little flashes of their growth and pasts and future. like, kyung being the general's son but still not being good enough is just ow. my heart. and then jiho's stupid pick-up lines and how it's brought up again in the end. ah.

fav lines:
Before we, you know, lift off and boldly go and all that shit

[maudlinsky]

You, dear, are amazing. Thanks for reading this crazy dream-like state of a fic I typed. You know i was about to tear open whole universes for it to live in.

And Neon Genesis Evangelion is awesome!!!!! I could only hope that this would be half as good. But thanks for the comparison, man. My Kyung is not and never will be the Kyung you imagine, and I'm kinda sad about that. But Zico, you know? I love to write him. He's my sanity sometimes. (Does that sound weird?)

I have no idea how you quoted is much of a short fic, but I don't even care. You know I adore you, kid. Hearts!