corrections... take serious notionlincinnabinDecember 1 2004, 05:19:33 UTC
THE BOLDED AREAS ARE THE AREAS THAT I FIXED. GO INTO YOUR PAPER AND COPY AND PASTE OR WRITE EXACTLY WHAT I WROTE IN THE BOLDED AREAS.VERBATUM!
Incorrect: "Now you’re in a ball, on your computer, staring at your computer screen" Correct: "Now you're in a ball, staring at your computer screen"
Incorrect:"But of course you can’t think of one thing Your brain is jumping from one thing to the next, never staying on one subject. " Correct:"But of course you can’t think of one thing; your brain is jumping from one thing to the next, never staying on one subject. "
Incorrect:"OH no, its back." Correct:"Oh no, it's back."
Incorrect:"your probably get a D-" Correct"you'll probably get a D-"
Incorrect:"much you would hate your self." Correct:"much you would hate yourself."
Incorrect:"you’re dieing on the" Correct:"you're dying on the"
Incorrect:"conversation with any one especially" Correct:"conversation with anyone especially"
Incorrect:"truly listing to the words" Correct:"truly listening to the words
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OK, NOW MARIAH, HERE IS THE DEAL. ONE: YOU NEED TO STOP CAPATILIZING WHOLE WORDS SO MUCH, IT DOESN'T LOOK NORMAL FOR AN ENGLISH PAPER. SECOND, "YOU'RE" AND "YOUR"; USE THEM CORRECTLY. THIRD, YOU BETTER FUCKING PRAISE ME FOR THIS BECAUSE I SPENT 48 FUCKING MINUTES OF MY DEVOTED, DEDICATED TIME AND UNDIVIDED ATTENTION TOWARDS THIS. IF I DIDN'T DO THIS, AND YOU LEFT IT THE WAY IT WAS, YOU WOULD HAVE GOTTEN A C+ IF YOU WERE LUCKY. FIX THE GODAMN MISTAKES AND DON'T BITCH AT ME AT SCHOOL. YOU'RE WELCOME!
heres your praise. thank you. I fixed them, but dont make me feel like shit cuz i suck at the other part of writing. MY PAPER WAS GOOD. just had alot of mistakes.
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Incorrect: "Now you’re in a ball, on your computer, staring at your computer screen"
Correct: "Now you're in a ball, staring at your computer screen"
Incorrect:"But of course you can’t think of one thing Your brain is jumping from one thing to the next, never staying on one subject. "
Correct:"But of course you can’t think of one thing; your brain is jumping from one thing to the next, never staying on one subject. "
Incorrect:"OH no, its back."
Correct:"Oh no, it's back."
Incorrect:"your probably get a D-"
Correct"you'll probably get a D-"
Incorrect:"much you would hate your self."
Correct:"much you would hate yourself."
Incorrect:"you’re dieing on the"
Correct:"you're dying on the"
Incorrect:"conversation with any one especially"
Correct:"conversation with anyone especially"
Incorrect:"truly listing to the words"
Correct:"truly listening to the words ( ... )
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