Comments | blondesimone: Untitled, Sansa/Sandor

blondesimone

Untitled, Sansa/Sandor

Aug 13, 2007 22:25

Title: Untitled
Genre: ASoIaF
Main Pair/Char: Sansa/Sandor
Beta'd: Nope, so please point out mistakes.
Rating: PG
Length: 784 words
Posted at: sansaxsandor
Author's Note: This is downright bribery for redcandle17 to write LJS fanfic. An AU where Sansa is Queen and Sandor is Kingsguard. Title suggestions would be sweet.

( Untitled )

sansa/sandor, sandor, asoiaf, sansa

Comments 6

redcandle17 August 14 2007, 02:51:26 UTC

You love me. You really love me. :D Thank you so much!

I know that's not how you meant it, but I'll tell myself the baby's Sandor's. Sandor has the same coloring and features as Ned/Jon/Arya and Arya is repeatedly assumed to be Sandor's daughter in the third book when they're travelling together - something that makes SanSan shippers very happy since we assume it means Sansa could claim any dark-haired grey-eyed, sharp-featured babies she had just happened to take after her father's side of the family. ;)

You used periods instead of commas at the end of all the dialogue but otherwise everything looks correct to me. /technical review

You're going to love the SanSan scenes in book two. I hope you get a chance to read it soon. Anyway, what kind of LJS fic do you want?

blondesimone August 14 2007, 13:16:49 UTC

Darn, I did mean for it to be Sandor's baby! I'll have to figure out how to make it clearer. Thanks for the technical review. I desperately need help with grammar and all of that.

As far as a LJS fic goes, I'm not picky. I prefer the Night World genre over the other series.

Give me more prompts and I can write something better for you. I'm sorta stuck until I read the next book, which I think I will go buy today.

redcandle17 August 14 2007, 14:50:10 UTC

Darn, I did mean for it to be Sandor's baby!

Oh, good. I was afraid I was being overzealously SanSanish. :D

I prefer the Night World series to the trilogies too. I'll try to think of something longer than drabble length.

Give me more prompts and I can write something better for you.

I'm far too SanSan-deprived to politely decline. :P How about an AU wherein Sandor comforts Sansa after her father's execution or after the first time Joffrey has her beaten?

renuki August 15 2007, 03:07:09 UTC

YAY! They going to have a baby! *cheers*

It was so cute! ^_^ (And I didn't really notice any mistakes.)

blondesimone August 16 2007, 15:33:07 UTC

Thanks! I fixed the mistkaes before I posted it to sansaxsandor. Glad you liked it!

renuki August 17 2007, 00:37:12 UTC

Welcome!

Heh, that was a great idea. :D

(And, good luck with any other fic you will write! :D)