The rush came upon him as he took to the air, the deafening cheers and blinding lights swallowing him into the game. It was the second game of the season and he wanted to dominate, to crush this team so badly that the rest of the League would sweat when their names appeared next to the Falcon’s on the line-up. His first year as Captain and he was
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I literally squeed when I saw this, what a wonderful story..
Marcus being so sure of his win, and then Katie ruining it the way she did at school;)
"This is my game. This is my win. I. Will. Take. You. Down."
This is such a great line for both of them.
So glad to see you again♥
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You're back! Have you been to L.J. Smith's new website yet? What do you think of the new Night World canon info?
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And the pyschadelic fantasy art creeps me out a little. Especially the unicorn.
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Love the way you describe the adrenalin response...their competitiveness, I can not only see it, but I can feel exactly how they feel.
Loved both Marcus' swagger and that he is conscious enough of it that we know it is partly an act. Loved his bribing the ref. Love your sassy Katie.
Am ridiculously geeked that this is for a prompt table as that suggests maybe we'll get more some time?
I have missed your writing *so* much. Thanks for sharing!
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I've gotten myself a recent Katie muse I'm wanting to write.
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And this piece? It was so alert I nearly fell off my chair while reading it!
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By the way, I enjoyed your Veronica Mars fic on your journal!
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Also, thank you; I had no idea that you have read it. I need to write a third part for it, though.
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