Sport, Marcus/Katie

Feb 23, 2008 23:50

The rush came upon him as he took to the air, the deafening cheers and blinding lights swallowing him into the game. It was the second game of the season and he wanted to dominate, to crush this team so badly that the rest of the League would sweat when their names appeared next to the Falcon’s on the line-up. His first year as Captain and he was ( Read more... )

lions_serpentschallenge, marcus flint, gryff/slyth, katie bell, katie/marcus, harrypotter

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lady_green_bat February 24 2008, 06:19:34 UTC
Awesome! It was kind of like a movie; I could sense the moment when time stood still as he saw who had taken the quaffle, just this sick pounding of heart and lungs at the dead moron who dared to steal his ball...and then he realizes. Great job.

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blondesimone February 25 2008, 03:04:37 UTC
Thanks! That's a really high compliment to me because I love the books you can read like movies the best. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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pippii February 24 2008, 15:26:52 UTC
You have no idea how much I have missed you, Simone;)

I literally squeed when I saw this, what a wonderful story..
Marcus being so sure of his win, and then Katie ruining it the way she did at school;)

"This is my game. This is my win. I. Will. Take. You. Down."
This is such a great line for both of them.

So glad to see you again♥

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blondesimone February 25 2008, 02:16:23 UTC
Hey Pippi!! ~huggles~ I missed you too! I've been thinking about you in my prayers. Thank you for commenting!

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redcandle17 February 24 2008, 17:26:22 UTC
Very nice fic.

You're back! Have you been to L.J. Smith's new website yet? What do you think of the new Night World canon info?

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blondesimone February 25 2008, 03:01:39 UTC
I was pretty shocked actually. At first I even wondered if it was a fake or something. Then I read the fics and Idunno, I was a little confused. The Ash and Mary-Lynette story was a little weird. I liked the beginning and the part where it mentioned Rashel, Quinn, and the Sisters went to go clear out the enclave gave me a plot bunny. Idunno, I'm withholding judgment until I read the last book.

And the pyschadelic fantasy art creeps me out a little. Especially the unicorn.

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Awesome! :D jenszabo February 25 2008, 04:55:27 UTC
I was so thrilled to see this.

Love the way you describe the adrenalin response...their competitiveness, I can not only see it, but I can feel exactly how they feel.

Loved both Marcus' swagger and that he is conscious enough of it that we know it is partly an act. Loved his bribing the ref. Love your sassy Katie.

Am ridiculously geeked that this is for a prompt table as that suggests maybe we'll get more some time?

I have missed your writing *so* much. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Awesome! :D blondesimone February 25 2008, 05:45:06 UTC
Lol, it's funny because your reaction was the same reaction I had when I saw who replied. :) Thanks for the comment. I hope your writing is going well.

I've gotten myself a recent Katie muse I'm wanting to write.

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savepureness February 25 2008, 17:31:44 UTC
I'm so glad you're back! This might as well as mean a community revival (you know what I'm talking about) *g*.

And this piece? It was so alert I nearly fell off my chair while reading it!

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blondesimone February 25 2008, 23:55:12 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it. I hope the community does start up again, we need some more gryff/slyth pairings!

By the way, I enjoyed your Veronica Mars fic on your journal!

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savepureness February 28 2008, 10:14:00 UTC
Both this community and the one dedicated to Marcus/Katie are too awesome to be lost, so you can imagine my snigger *g*.

Also, thank you; I had no idea that you have read it. I need to write a third part for it, though.

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