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Short Story: Love

Jun 23, 2003 21:48

Title: Love
Rating: PG (people seem to think that slash needs a higher rating than het)
Type: Short Story
Genre: Romance; Femmeslash
Timeframe: Finished on Monday 23rd June.
Inspiration: The love a friend of mine has.
Notes: Well, this is for you, my dear. It's 'the thing' I've been working on. I really hope you like it. Looking at it now, I'm kind ( Read more... )

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setissma June 23 2003, 18:16:56 UTC

*cries* That was so great. You are such a great author. I am muy jealous of your talent. I loff you. *hug* Thanks, Hel. I am reduced to a state of complacent inelegancy, but that... that meant more to me than words can say. Thank you- it was wonderful.

What a wonderfull story... anonymous June 23 2003, 18:54:41 UTC

My Dearest Hellion,

It is with great pleasure that I am finally allowed ((Ha…)) to flex my claws and tell you, with the utmost graciousness of course, to fuck off.
She, *points to Madison * is -my- girlfriend, and I would be most appreciative if you stayed the ifrinn away from her.
Though you’re lovely little piece of literature is very nice, and I’m sure you little friendly manner is both convincing and deluding, you’re absolutely kidding yourself.
She is MINE…and you can not have her.
So…
Go away.
I sincerely hope my sneaking suspicions are completely unnecessary, as there is no possible way you could be crushing on my girlfriend.
If, however, you for one moment think that you can just frolic around flirting with her, hitting on her, and or seducing her, I shall be forced to hurt you.
Whether she likes it or not
((Speaking of which…heyla Tia dear, fuck is indeed often used in polite conversation, and I am not yelling.))
That is all
Have a nice life

Yours truly,

Foxy Bitch

Re: What a wonderfull story... setissma June 23 2003, 18:58:38 UTC

--; I told her to be polite if she had to say ANYTHING... Sorry, Hel. I think we knew she would do this. *cheeky grin* She's hypocritical, and it is really quite shameful how much I love her, as I would love to kick her arse to Japan. Woefully, I'm leaving in less than an hour, and won't. Ignore her. I thought it was brilliant.

Re: What a wonderfull story... anonymous June 23 2003, 20:31:37 UTC

a) i was polite!
b) she deserved it...galla...
c) i am hypocritical but that has nothing to do with anything!
d) i miss you
e) i love you
f) *glares at the Hellion*

Re: What a wonderfull story... helzebel June 23 2003, 23:42:40 UTC

Amusing. You shouldn't be so insecure, my dear vixen, when it is obvious that Madison loves you more than anything. How can you feel threatened by me?

I assure you, if I was 'crushing on your girlfriend', then this story would have been totally different. Your 'sneaking suspicions' are nothing more than paranoia. It is supposed to be an expression of how, even though I dislike you, I also have to like you in a way because you have made my friend so happy. I feel love as a friend for her, and nothing more. It's odd the way you think you know so much about my romantic longings on the basis of two short online meetings. And how do I flirt with her? Considering, as I said, you have seen us in the same place only twice, you really can't judge. Another thing you should note - even if I actually did have feelings for her, then I would not make a move on her in any way. I wouldn't take her away from someone who loves her so much, even someone annoying as you.

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