000; Prologue

Nov 01, 2006 20:52

Chapter Title: 000; Prologue
Word Count: 1095 (about half of what I wanted, but hey)
Rating: PG-13 (because Shadow swears a lot when he's annoyed)
Notes: Not the best piece of writing, but my story's got to start somewhere, I guess. I'm working on killing my inner editor, so... Here goes nothing. Shadow and Witch are going by codenames at the ( Read more... )

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i_venti November 2 2006, 06:50:26 UTC
fingers running over the small flower petals as if to memorize every little bit of its surface

I love that line for some reason. ♥ And I love the interaction between Shadow and Witch XD Shadow, the brusque, callous one, and Witch, the "no srsly, I can see" one...

“Like I’ve got any choice, Witch?”

I don't know if you intended it or not, but I liked the whole "angry excuse to vehemently use the word 'Witch' while thinking of it as another word" here. XD Anyway, again, I looo~ooove the contrast between Shadow and Witch, and I'm intruiged about, well, everything. :3! *WAITS FOR MOAARRR*

- hl

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