poems suck when i write them

[blood_red_kiss]

i hate people
i hate drama
i wish i was in a bubble
away from you.

i wrote a poem yesterday.
it goes a little something like this:

watch me cry
do you see the hurt in my eyes
i hope you feel the pain
of what you have done to me
are you immune to remorse?
or does my damaged mind
simply not phase your black heart

Comments

[heartsmouth]

its so sad but i love your poetry.....so deep and beautiful

xoxo
I hope you feel better

[shewrotemurder]

That's my favorite one you've written. :D Congratulations.