Fic: Whispered Admiration

[bloodism]

AUTHOR: bloodism
TITLE: Whispered Admiration
FANDOM: Sherlock BBC
RATING: NC-17 (Mature)
PAIRING: Sherlock/John
WORD COUNT: 3212

Fill for this prompt.

Sherlock and John are pressed together in the most compromising position, in a closet, whilst hiding from criminals. John should be scared, but it's hard to be when your mouth is only a few inches away from your

Comments

[sam80853]

Guhhhhh... Hot!

[bloodism]

Thanks! It's my first try at a guy-on-guy scene. Glad you liked it. ^^

[karadin]

I would have liked to try this, but the formatting put me off reading, you need to space between sentances.

[bloodism]

Ah, sorry. I added spaces. It did look a little strange, but I couldn't quite put my finger on what was wrong. Thanks for telling me. <3

[grandilloquism]

I really liked this-- just the right combination of sweet and hot.

[bloodism]

Awww, thank you! ;___; I was trying to go for all-out hotness, but I blush insanely when I write words like 'erection', which is why I usually end up with sweetness too. *sigh* xD

[maccadole]

Brilliantly delicious! Thanks for writing it. I love the enclosed space theme in fics! Can never get enough of it.

You wrote it wonderfully. It all made sense.
Guh. Brilliant!

[bloodism]

Thank you so much! I had so little confidence in this and you just boosted it up completely.

I love the enclosed space theme more than I should. >;D It's where it all starts.

[shamedintellect]

This was brilliant. And hot. And I could TASTE Sherlock's neck.

It was delicious.

[bloodism]

Thank you. *___* <3 It was my first complete Sherlock one-shot so I'm SO glad I got the imagery across.

I hope you enjoyed the taste of Sherlock's neck. ;D