Fic: Artistic Indulgence

Nov 14, 2011 17:21

AUTHOR: bloodism
TITLE: Artistic Indulgence
FANDOM: Sherlock BBC
RATING: NC-17 (Mature)
PAIRING: Sherlock/John
WORD COUNT: 1152
DEDICATED: For you, Nicks.

'The expression of a well-made man appears not only in his face...' In which John studies the art that is Sherlock.

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fic: artistic indulgence, fandom: sherlock bbc, one-shot, pairing: sherlock/john, rating: nc-17, length: 1000-5000

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artemis_gruu November 14 2011, 18:08:54 UTC
Dear god, I may have to go for a lie down after that. Exquisite, utterly exquisite. Reading this makes me want to forget all about everything else and get out the oil paints.

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bloodism November 14 2011, 18:55:23 UTC
Best. Comment. Ever. ;_____; Really, thank you so much. <3

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mrs_tilford November 14 2011, 18:20:12 UTC
Your entry is very well written; unfortunately, it is nigh unreadable. Please reconsider your use of dark grey print on a black background.

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bloodism November 14 2011, 18:56:30 UTC
Thanks. I've made the text lighter now. It looked fine on my screen, even though the contrast is low, so it might be a problem at your end. I've changed it anyway.

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mrs_tilford November 14 2011, 22:06:47 UTC
Ah, much better - thanks! I will, however, look into my machine to see if there is a problem with its contrast.

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Web Page Readability taverymate November 15 2011, 09:12:05 UTC
I agree that the color choices are problematic for many potential readers, including myself.* You're probably aware of these shortcuts to improve page readability, but on the off-chance that you're not, I find them invaluable ( ... )

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bloodism November 14 2011, 18:56:42 UTC
Thank you. ;____; <3

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uwsannajane November 14 2011, 19:21:21 UTC
Elegantly written, and a really nice deployment of Walt Whitman, too!

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bloodism November 14 2011, 19:23:02 UTC
Thank you! I saw the poem on tumblr and inspiration just hit me. I'm glad it came out okay. ^^

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days_of_storm November 14 2011, 21:15:34 UTC
This is breathtakingly gorgeous!

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bloodism November 14 2011, 21:38:47 UTC
Thanks! :D

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