Commentary?

[bloodlustwitch]

  I'm applying to teach at my old high school for the summer and I've to write this essay about why I wanna be there.  So here's what I've got.  I want to send it out on Tuesday so if you all have any improvements to suggest - I'd love to hear 'em!  And errrrrr, Harkness is just the method of education that's in the high school that's pretty much

Comments

[mortalysis]

!

I am too!

[bloodlustwitch]

Wow! I had no idea you'd want to go back to teach at Ex. Perhaps we'll get to spend a salacious and reeediculous summer together. How amazing! xo

[fadedmoonrise]

Lovely! But "Master's of Harkness" (at the end) shouldn't have an apostrophe. :o)

[bloodlustwitch]

*blush* I realized that after I posted the message. Let's just say that writing is not my forte. xo

[witheringrose]

My sister's planning to apply as well. Exonians are so funny.

Great essay. Capitalizing the M of "Masters of Harkness" sounds a bit ass-kissy. Just something to consider. Lowercase sounds more like an objective statement.

Good luck!