Comments | bloodofpyke: Better off Calling the Ghostbusters: an Attack the Block Comment Ficathon

bloodofpyke

Better off Calling the Ghostbusters: an Attack the Block Comment Ficathon

Dec 20, 2011 17:13

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inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:10:56 UTC

Moses/Sam, post-movie, Here is the part where everyone was happy all the time and we were all forgiven, / even though we didn't deserve it.

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:12:37 UTC

or, alternatively, Dear Forgiveness, you know that recently / we have had our difficulties and there are many things / I want to ask you.

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inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:21:08 UTC

everyone, post-movie; You hear the first boot hit the floor and you're looking up, / you're waiting / because you thought it would follow, you thought there would be / some logic, perhaps, something to pull it all together / but here we are in the weeds again, / here we are / in the bowels of the thing: your world doesn't make sense. / And then the second boot falls. / And then a third, a fourth, a fifth.

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:26:32 UTC

Moses/Sam, post-movie, These are the dreams we should be having. I shouldn't have to / clean them up like this.

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 07:49:37 UTC

sam's boyfriend comes back. perhaps he managed to get a snippet off the news for once, or maybe sam called him herself, but however it happened he's there right away. must have caught the first plane back. some tool sliding into sam's space - her flat, and on top of that he always stands too close, angles his body to shield her and tuck her away behind a tallish handsomeish wall of african-orphan-saving arrogance. staying at the block like he belongs, like he lived through it or could possibly understand what it was like ( ... )

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 07:51:47 UTC

holy shit. this is beautiful and hard-hitting and says so much with so little. i love how it matters how sam has changed, how she's hardened. dkallgdkdg this is just so good!!!

bloodofpyke December 21 2011, 08:13:53 UTC

this is amazing! i love the way you show how sam's changed without telling it, and just. it's wonderful!

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:32:14 UTC

Biggz/Dennis, I don't really blame you for being dead but you can't have your sweater back.

emilyforprez December 22 2011, 05:43:12 UTC

Oi, Dennis, it's Biggz, man. You'd never believe what just happened. You know those little shits, er -- Probs and Mayhem, yeah? Saved my ass back there. I reckon I'd be dead if not for them. Crazy ( ... )

bloodofpyke December 22 2011, 05:49:41 UTC

oh, shit, this is so fucking good.
my heart
these kids

inksplotch_ed January 8 2012, 15:17:40 UTC

This is heart-breaking and I really enjoyed this a lot. I'm really gravitate to the idea of pre-movie Dennis/Biggz now...

inksplotch_ed December 21 2011, 06:33:51 UTC

all of the kids, any time period, We are / not traitors but the lights go out. It's dark.