Circles and Rings [Chronological Version]

[bloodredrosez]

Title: Circles and Rings - Chronological Version ONLY
Length: 3 Parts (~17,500 word count)
Status: Complete
Author: bloodredrosezRating: NC-17

Comments

[ouji]

ahh thank you for the downloadable version! i shall come back with my long comments once i'm reading it :D <3

[ouji]

ok i finished reading the chronological version and i think when it's looked upon that way, it makes a scenes a bit more dramatizing and yunho less like a jerk xD well with the order it's going, it looks like yunho was just being nice all along instead of going through alot of weird moments with jaejoong and how he should only look at him :D lol that's just i feel about reading it in order :)

also it's not confusing! everything made completely perfect sense(in a plot wise) and it was so much easier to follow o__o!! sorry call me stupid, but my brain is simply use to chronological order xD and i noticed that the dongsaengs seems to do more in the beginning until they all hand it over to yunho :) <3

and omo!~ so THAT's where the other smut scenes came from :D <3 it was really hard to place where they were doing it and when, which got me confused on the third part i believe x___X

[djcassie99]

thanks for downloadable version ^^

[sly_heiress]

thank you for the chronological version as well.
i have read the linear version and i can't wait to compare it from the chronological version. i enjoyed reading this fic and later after i'm done reading and downloading the pdf file, i'll add this to my lj memorable entries. ;)

[kahel_luna]

downloading the chronological version which I hope I can read soon. it would be irrational for me to read it tonight when my head is spinning from lack of sleep.

[kahel_luna]

Finally I was able to read it after getting some much needed sleep.

It is true that there is something much more in the story when you read it in the chronological order versus than the order you posted it.

I enjoyed reading your story both ways. And I really enjoy your narrative style. This story is going to be part of my favorite Yunjae work along with the one you wrote before, Memento Mori.

[erisuchis]

Thanks! I'll download now ^^