First Time

Nov 25, 2012 21:54

Title: First Time
Chapters: One-Shot
Author: bloodrozen
Warnings: manxman, uses of cursing/swearing, uses of alcohol
Genre: romance, smut
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: ToraxSaga
Summary: He was gifted with luck. He got everything he needs. But why did he feel this way?
Disclaimer: I own my fantasy.
Comment: Basically, this is a re-VAMP version.

Everything was perfect for him. )

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yousei_ranka November 27 2012, 01:22:33 UTC
This is sooooooooooooo lovely with hot bittersweet smut scene, I'm happy that Tora finally had a happy birthday and Saga finally meet his savior <333

oh and I hope you had a happy night seeing A9 in live, especially Saga, I heard from my friend who saw him in person, he was sooo white and angelic (>/////<)

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witch_chameleon November 27 2012, 07:49:13 UTC
HI!When i started to read it, i doubt gender, "not this fic i read this before" but as they progressed through had changes, and i was difficult to know if that was true or not. When I read the notes and more with the end of it I understood everything, this fic i liked it a lot and now with the re-change i liked more, the fact of his having been added more scenes, gives more impact to the story. I liked ! The love between them is beautiful, by which it was almost like a coincidence, but both were looking for in some way, is needed, by what they were intended for, and loved the ToraxSaga <3

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bloodrozen November 27 2012, 10:12:40 UTC
Hey there!
Hahaha, thanks for reading.

The truth is, I was not satisfied with the previous storyline because I kind of focus on the sex scene more than their thoughts for one another. But knowing that someone once read my previous version made me happy. Thank you.

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yukinao20 November 27 2012, 17:35:59 UTC
Tora is Saga's hero!!!
I like it when Saga fully trusted Tora >///<
and Tora got perfect present on his birthday! :3 it was so sweet~

anyway, good luck with the Sundown Festival! :D

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bloodrozen December 4 2012, 01:44:26 UTC
Hahaha, thank you for reading!
Yes, the Sundown Festival was awesome!
You can read my journal on the event itself cause I've uploaded a few photo of them.

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yukinao20 December 7 2012, 16:00:23 UTC
hehehe~
ah you posted photo? I'll look at them later <3
what I noticed from sundown festival was that braman *saga* XDDD

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k435y November 28 2012, 05:09:12 UTC
sweet! happy ending = happy me. XD uru must be saga (or toras?) fairy godmother. thanks for sharing. =)

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bloodrozen December 4 2012, 01:49:36 UTC
Thank you for reading!
Uruha is an ANGEL!
If he wasn't, he wouldn't be there to save Saga and predict Tora's fate. :D

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bloodrozen December 4 2012, 01:51:53 UTC
Hahaha, thanks for reading!
I was thinking of making a sequel on this story...maybe after I came back from Bangkok?
By the way, are you the one who followed me in twitter? :)

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