To Dream

[bloodwild]

He dreams

His eyes, they close.
His breath, it slows.

He is dreaming

Eyelids flutter,
His mind is far and away.

He was dreaming

Finding only that this perfect happiness,
Was simply unreal and untrue.
A lie.

He dreamt

Showing him what could never be,
He vowed never to dream again.

He used to dream.

Comments

[saymoo_lindre]

its really good. I like the whole change of tense through out and its not as suicidal as the last one :)
<3

[lastdecember]

that was tremendously sad.
but i think that its so sad to me cause i can kinda relate.
and its probably not about what you think it is.

this makes me want to post some of my own writing too.
anyway, great job. i like it best, out of all of yours so far.

love you.

Tear

[pinakalana]

This is like your very beautiful and yet super depressing poem page. How about we get some pretty unicorns and rainbows stuff goin on in here?
Love you, Call me, and come visit me!

hey you

[sexpotnot]

hey ben, its danielle kardasz. i cant believe i came across your lj. talk to ya soon

Re: hey you

[bloodwild]

Hey- If you haven't already found it, I have another journal for actual updates. It's 'saucyji' But yea, we should talk sometime.

[emooly]

amazing.