Just Pretending... - Chapter 7

[bloodytearslife]

Hehe! Yes you are reading this right. I have a new chapter! Sorry it took so long. School has been majorly crazy. And now I will shut up so you can get to the good stuff. ;-)

Title: Just Pretending…
Author: BloodyTearsOfLife
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All characters belong to the Joss, he just let’s me play with them.
Summary: A visit from the

Comments

[arieldawn]

LOVE LOVE LOVE it, but then you already knew that.

[bloodytearslife]

Hehe! Know you did, but it's always good to hear it.

*giggles at your icon*

[arieldawn]

In other news, I have Dawn saying 'Holy Crap' everytime I get a new email from my site. It's sorta similar.

[copykween]

Haha....Thornhill! Very appropriate name for her, IMO. lol

“I’ll catch you. If you fall, I’ll catch you,” Spike whispered into her ear.
I LOVE this line. Spike's a smart manpire...he knows he needs to get her to think with her blood and not with her brain, if they're ever going to go forward.

Waiting for all hell to break loose next chap!

[bloodytearslife]

Hehe! Me and AD talked about a good last name to use for a long while. All credit goes to her for that one. I came up with the line.

Yes. See, I like my Spike a bit intelligent. I think they made him too dumb sometimes. Really made me mad. I mean, he's how old and he doesn't know not to say crypt in front of the social worker?

Hehe, the chaos is so happening next chapter!

[arieldawn]

I protest, I am not responsible for the last name, you came up with Thornburn...Thornhill just sounded better

[bloodytearslife]

Whatever. It was a creative collaboration. ;-)

*cough*Renwick*cough*

Ha ha!

[my_perfect_muse]

I think I've waited too long to comment on this, but I absolutely love the whole story! Spike is written so well and I can just see him smirking in front of me through out.
And I loved Xander hitting the floor at the end... can't wait for the next part, and this one was certainly worth the wait :)

Re: Ha ha!

[bloodytearslife]

Reviews and feedback are NEVER too late. Thanks so speaking up! So glad you're liking the story. Having a reader be able to see what I'm trying to show is exactly what I'm aiming for. You couldn't have given me a better compliment. *blushes*

[poofy_whit]

It's amazing how well I can picture this. And the Xander fainting was just perfect.

[bloodytearslife]

Thank you! It's always good to hear I'm painting a good picture.

[alwaysjbj]

I've been playing catch up as I had fallen a little behind. This is such a fun story, and this chap was just lovely...yummy, sweet and snarky all rolled into one.

Methinks the proverbial shit is about to hit the fan! LOL

[bloodytearslife]

Thanks. I do my best to bring the best of all.

Methinks yous is right. ;-)