Lessons Learned - Chapter One

[bloodyxunicorns]

This is being removed for now. I apologize if it's an inconvenience for anyone, but I just feel like it needs some good edits for it to be, well, not embarrassing (for me). I reread through it recently and was a bit horrified by the many grammar problems it has. So for now it's down until I can either edit it and pick it back up, or, well, for good

Comments

[brknhalo241]

Well, I, for one, believe you're off to a great start. You already have me invested in Porter and what happens to him. Very nice!

[bloodyxunicorns]

Thanks! Glad to hear that ^^ I was a bit wary that I'd screw this up since it's my first ever slave/master fic, and that it'd be complete crap :P

Thanks for leaving feedback, I appreciate it :)

[methosdeb]

loved it ,Porter is such a sweet boy ,I hopes his new master is nice to him and takes his time with him .

[bloodyxunicorns]

aw, glad to hear you loved it and think Porter sweet (he is!) :)

Thanks for leaving feedback, I'll try to get the next chapter posted soon in order to get the story rolling more (this chapter was short!)

[frauleinslash]

I like this story; the characters are interesting ^^ Mind if I add your journal to keep up with the updates? :)

[bloodyxunicorns]

Thanks, glad you think they're interesting so far :) And go ahead, I don't mind ^^

Thanks for leaving feedback. And I like your icon ;) Mm...

[charisstoma]

I think that I'm going to love this. Excellent start.

[bloodyxunicorns]

Thanks! :) Hopefully I don't disappoint.

[sexycazzy]

This is really a good start...I loved it! :)

[bloodyxunicorns]

Glad to hear that ^^ thanks for commenting :)