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blu4vr

Fic: Cicatrices (part one of four) (ER; Neela/Ray)

Jul 27, 2010 15:04

So I've seen exactly one full episode of ER, but one day last summer I suddenly found myself reading, and then attempting to write, Ray / Neela fanfic. Doesn't this happen to everyone?

Here, in four parts, is the result.....

Title: Cicatrices (part one of four)
Rating: R for loads of sex and language and overall adult stuff
Summary: Everything is ( Read more... )

er; fic; neela/ray

Comments 5

badboy_fangirl July 28 2010, 18:00:29 UTC

Well, this is magically delicious.

Aside from the fact that you have the characters down (without rabid repeated viewings of their work, apparently), I absolutely love the music-themes you've woven so effortlessly into Ray's view point. It only makes sense that he would encase his whole world in a musical metaphor, even though he's a doctor because his first love will always be music. It's simply brilliant.

Their tentative and hairline fracture-fragile relationship is also well done, and the fears and concerns they both have are so them. No neat happy endings for these two. But love so powerful, and a little nauseating (poor Ray) is what they've always been about.

I am dying for the next part, and am off to read it now. Thank you for writing this. (I worship at the altar of lowriseflare and followed her instructions to come hither and read.)

blu4vr July 28 2010, 18:31:37 UTC

Thank you! I read your Neela/Ray fics and really enjoyed them when I was working on mine, so the comment means a lot!

badboy_fangirl July 28 2010, 22:11:31 UTC

When I get some time later today, I'll come back and leave my thoughts on the rest of it (I'm reading in between actual moments of having to work :D), but I just wanted to say PSHAW! about my Ray/Neela fics, because they are so meh, in my opinion. But thank you. Talk soon!

rachel_wilder July 28 2010, 20:59:13 UTC

This is really wonderful--great writing and I'm intrigued with the new characters you've woven into the story. Looking forward to going on to the next part...

Shipper Manifesto: Ray Barnett/Neela Rasgotra, ER pingback_bot September 1 2010, 21:20:10 UTC

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