Stop making sense!

[blubird_pie]

Title: The Name of the Bar is Called Heaven

Summary: Jo meets Jess after Carthage, and it turns out they have a lot in common

Word count: 1,400
Rated: pg-13 (Language)
Notes: Set S5; Spoilers through 5.10
Genre: Femslash
Characters: Jo/Jess
A/N: Inspired by the Talking Heads’ “Heaven” from “Stop Making Sense”
Disclaimer: Supernatural and it's characters

Comments

[melanth0]

how do I love this let me count the ways OH WAIT if I did that we'd be here all night.

I completely ship this as of now.

And I just love how you've written them; Jess is so completely darling, and Jo is just Jo, and I've always really identified with Jo so I love it when people get her just right.

this is so sweet. bittersweet, but mostly sweet. I adore Jo's frustration about Dean, and that Jess wouldn't stay with Sam now, even though she's clearly still in love with him at least a bit, and oh I love it all.

[blubird_pie]

You flatter me too much, Imma get a big head! I'm super-pleased that the 'ship is convincing, though. On the surface I guess it's sort of cracky, but they really do have things in common (and not just being really hot blondes!) I almost feel like this is a meta about female voices in SPN, weirdly enough. Thanks for commenting, especially because this one's outside my usual range ;)

[feathertofly]

Okay, when I got to this line She smiles at Jo, a wicked little flash of teeth my hands came off of the computer and did the *flail* thingy. No lie.
I LOVED this! What a view of heaven, and I love how you worked everyone in, having at least a piece of their happily ever after. :)

[blubird_pie]

Hee, that's awesome! I'm really pleased you liked it (and commented!). It was interesting thinking about how different characters would find this version of heaven, I'm glad that you liked seeing 'em!

[tifaching]

This was a scenario I never even pictured and I LOVE when an author does that for me. This was amazing and sweet and just so believable. I love heaven stories in general and this one in particular. Excellent work!

[blubird_pie]

I'm really happy you liked it! I kind of surprised myself with it, but it was tons of fun to write- and now you're giving me such nice feedback! Thank you for that, it means alot to me.

[tifaching]

I loved it so much I recced it on my journal and it's the first time I've ever done that! And thanks for friending me, I friended you back!

[blubird_pie]

*blush* awesome on both counts! I'll try to keep the quality fics coming ;)

[norwich36]

I really loved this.

[blubird_pie]

Thank you very much!

[yourkidney]

I love this. Period. And you should do a follow-up with the boys coming to heaven too haha.

[blubird_pie]

Thank you! I bet Sam'n'Dean would be just as bored as Jo with such an easy afterlife, hehe