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That Shit Must Hurt Real Bad

Apr 26, 2010 20:35

Title: Fakin' What you Wish you Had
Summary: Meg wants to finish what she started with Jo.
Word count: 1,900
Rated: NC-17 (Sexuality, violence)
Notes: Set S5; Spoilers for "Bad Day at Black Rock"
Warnings: Dub-con, knife-play, general twisted-ness
Genre: Femslash, pwp, dark
Characters: Meg/Jo
Disclaimer: Not Kripke, don't own, no financial incentive to ( Read more... )

jo pov, fic, femslash, spn, dark, dance monkey dance, s5

Comments 6

melanth0 April 27 2010, 04:20:27 UTC

YOU ARE AWESOME

this was fabulous. I have been wishing for some Meg/Jo for months, and this was a) not what I was expecting and b) excellent. I love the inconsistency of Jo's competence, and the changing power dynamics throughout...and Meg. Of course, of course Meg would pick the most gorgeous body.
ngh.

thank you so much for writing!

blubird_pie April 27 2010, 04:32:03 UTC

Haa, thank you! I'm really glad it worked, it's nice to be nudged out of one's box but sometimes hard to gauge the success. There should totally be more Meg smut in the world! I read a Meg/Dean piece, I think roqueclassique's? and it was quite good. But it wasn't femslash, and I love Jo, and that scene with her and Meg!Sam was super evocative. So I'm glad you asked for it! It was very interesting to write my first nc-17 fic ;)

lexhibition April 27 2010, 12:35:11 UTC

Yeeesssssss. This was really, really excellent. I love how you've written Jo: competent and strong and hot. I'll never believe that she didn't get up to all sorts of awesome stuff hunting by herself, and I wish we'd got to see it.

blubird_pie April 27 2010, 20:31:07 UTC

Seriously! I like Jo lots, how she's this blend of badass and little traces of insecurity, and I wish they'd fit a few more eps with her in. There's such a gap between where she is at the end of the Meg episode and "God God Y'all."

Thanks very much for commenting, I'm really pleased to get positive responses to writing outside my usual range!

scarletsherlock April 27 2010, 21:46:47 UTC

This is excellent. I love hot, uncompromising Jo, and the delicious (literal) power struggle between them. This was smoldering, smoking hot, and utterly perfect for both of them.

blubird_pie April 28 2010, 00:26:39 UTC

Thanks! It would be more obvious to have Meg in charge throughout, but I think Jo pulled the switch off well ;) Great icon, btw!