FIC: Vanilla Ain't Nothing But a Flavor

Jul 17, 2011 22:58

Title: Vanilla Ain't Nothing But a Flavor
Summary: Dean calls Castiel a word he doesn't like
Pairing: Dean/Castiel preslash
Rating: PG
Word count: 483 words
Notes: Planned as a series of short stories and drabbles. Thanks to the ever lovely llwyden for the super fast beta, preventing me from abusing poor unsuspecting semi colons.

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destiel, slash, supernatural, fiction

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wickedvirtue July 18 2011, 06:22:49 UTC
I like this! I like the thoughts that go through Cas' head that show his understanding of the nuances of Dean's language. I'm on board to see where this goes!

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blucola July 18 2011, 06:28:38 UTC
Thank you. I really appreciate the kind words. :)

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strelitzia_bleu July 18 2011, 08:11:18 UTC
Teehee. Oh, Cas.

This is a really cute ficlet, made me smile. I like how analytical and distanced Castiel is from his own sense of ego. And Dean's "Whoa, there, Trigger" line is super on-point. :3

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blucola July 18 2011, 12:56:57 UTC
Teehee. Oh, Cas.

He's got a bit of a journey ahead of him. LOL

Thank you, I always love to know what works, especially Dean's voice, since he only gets two lines here. :)

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earth_heart July 18 2011, 08:58:45 UTC
*giggles* Oh, Castiel. You poor, poor angel fool.

... Get yo'self some sexy threads, man. Then Dean won't think you need a lady. He'll be wantin' you all for himself.

*thumbs up* I like this very much indeed, m'dear. I r b excite. ♥♥

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blucola July 18 2011, 13:00:45 UTC
... Get yo'self some sexy threads, man. Then Dean won't think you need a lady. He'll be wantin' you all for himself.

Oh, there will be clothing selected, for reals. Poor lad's gotta prove he can dress better than Columbo.

*thumbs up* I like this very much indeed, m'dear. I r b excite. ♥♥

Thank you! I like excite. *beambeambeam*

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earth_heart July 18 2011, 23:14:18 UTC
I bet underneath that awkward, boxy trench coat and the ill-fitting suit, Castiel is a man who knows fashion and can make himself look sexay and good. *evil grin* God knows he's got the body for it~

Well then that's good, because I r b very excite! 8D

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vasiliki July 18 2011, 11:09:02 UTC
he is bland and plain, perhaps lacking in sexual appeal.

Oh my, that angel has no sense of self-awareness! *g*

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blucola July 18 2011, 13:02:32 UTC
Oh my, that angel has no sense of self-awareness! *g*

His problem is he's so literal. It might get him into trouble. *g*

Thank you for the kind words. :)

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la_rubinita July 18 2011, 16:29:56 UTC
Confused consternation. Perfect. Really cute fic :D

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blucola July 18 2011, 17:19:54 UTC
Thanks! There's nothing I like more than getting a "perfect" on my word choices. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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