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bludtizfan

Chapter fourteen - new beginning

Feb 23, 2008 17:37

Chapter Fourteen

A New Beginning

Later Vicky and Henry were snuggled up together in his bed. They had made love more than once and were both trying to catch their breath. Suddenly Vicky nudged Henry. “Henry, HENRY. You left the light on in the living room!” she said excitedly.

“Hmmm, I’ll turn it out later” he then started to nibble ( Read more... )

Comments 6

fitzsgirl February 24 2008, 15:13:38 UTC

Excellent story. Can't wait to read more.

Thank You bludtizfan February 24 2008, 15:23:45 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm going to read yours now. Am new to this site and still stumbling along.

hermyam February 24 2008, 16:51:06 UTC

Hi! Had just finished reading this story over on Twice Bitten as I didn't realise you had an LJ. I hope that you'll write a sequel to this. Loved the way you resolved the sight, daylight issues for Henry and Vicki and found Mike a new love interest.

PS Thanks for friending me. Am friending you back, ok?

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Re: HELLO MY "NEW" FRIEND bludtizfan February 24 2008, 18:54:12 UTC

cool, Locust Grove here between Fredericksbug and Culpeper. Love going to Virgina beach, raised in CA and always like being near the ocean, eithe one.

teresab313 February 29 2008, 16:46:05 UTC

Great story! I think a sequel is in order :-) I can't believe Coreen didn't catch on to what Gerald really is, though...

Coreen bludtizfan February 29 2008, 17:33:33 UTC

She knows, she's just being Coreen.