Comments | blue_ching: Mourn for me

blue_ching

Mourn for me

May 18, 2013 17:36

Title: Mourn for me
Pairing: Kris/Suho, past!Chanyeol/Suho
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~8k
Summary: Joonmyun goes through seven stages

WARNING! sexual content, rimming, implied character death, profanity.

Note: filling this prompt at exopromptmeme

( Kris doesn’t promise fairytale endings; no happily ever afters, no safety net, no buoyancy. )

pairing: suho/chanyeol, pairing: kris/suho, length: oneshot, member: kris, ficdom: exo, member: suho, member: chanyeol, rating: nc-17

Comments 24

indira22 May 20 2013, 07:31:34 UTC

Can i cry!!! * i cry first for all desperate moment Joomyun feel b4 and that lovely Ending*
GOD SOMEBODY PLEASE HOLD ME!!! *sobs in my desk,and thank God i didnt have any meeting now --*

blue_ching May 20 2013, 10:35:20 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting <3

and oh gad gull! dun cry!!! /lends you my shoulder and a large box of Kleenex two-ply/ ;A;

haevenli May 27 2013, 18:23:37 UTC

GOD THIS IS. GOD.
SO MANY EMOTIONS. SO MUCH... I JUST..
the way you depicted 'love' as a feeling of breathlessness feels so right like you don't even know. ; u ;
i don't even know what i'm saying anymore like this. i.
kris. just. fuck.

- a very emotionally confused reader.

blue_ching June 4 2013, 09:00:43 UTC

;;3;; thank you so much for you comment!! it makes me so happy to know that you enjoyed it <3 thank you~~

torakiss June 4 2013, 10:18:37 UTC

yuting actually recommended this to me aside from the fact that i track the suho/kris tag at sncj. i'm sorry it took me a long while to read this (as i went into a "hate" phase for this pairing, although you don't need to know that) XD i'm really glad i got to read this. and oh, may i say that i love your writing style? it's very poetic and oh gosh i'm glad i didn't read the prompt first because that could've spoiled everything for me c':

And really, there’s no denying that it’s Kris who takes his breath away with just a simple kiss.
it took me a while to get that tbh (i thought they went into another universe orz i'm so stupid) but i think this is a very good sentence to conclude the fic! ;w; and i'm really glad you wrote a happy ending for them! TwT ♥

thank you so much for writing this wonderful fic!

blue_ching June 7 2013, 09:58:48 UTC

it's okay! thank you for taking the time to read this! I really appreciate it <3

oh gosh i don't even think that i have any 'writing style' to speak of so thank you so much for your feedback!
you're so lovely and i'm so unworthy.

it's alright, i honestly didn't expect anyone to understand unless they had read the prompt huhu.

thank you for reading and leaving such a meaningful comment
<3333

nanakirae July 1 2013, 14:50:37 UTC

I'm gonna cry. This is so perfect I cannot even.
Like wow I love it. I especially love the way you express his feelings. The angst was sad, the sex was hot and the krisho relationship makes me want to cry especially the part where they made love instead of plain fucking. I love this. I love you and I am so checking out your other fics.

notemoperfect August 6 2013, 09:26:46 UTC

WOW.
I JUST.
WOOOOOOOOW.

this was beautiful, especially how their relationship developed. I didn't actually understand the ending until i read the prompt, and then it was just "OH. OHMYGOODNESS." thank you for going past the prompt and adding in 'hope'. otherwise i really would have been bawling if it were just the original prompt. This was such a good read!!