Fic: HitsuHina: Wait (1/1)

[blue_crystal_9]

Hinamori woke up, half frozen, and forced herself out of bed to retrieve another blanket from the closet in the hall. On her way to the closet, she glanced out of the window and froze mid-step when she realized that someone was sitting outside on the porch.

Upon closer inspection, she realized it was Hitsugaya of all people, sitting on the fifth

Comments

[frozenhowlz]

Gahhh! I loved how you worded this story so well. <3

[blue_crystal_9]

Thank you. ♥

[moezychan]

I've missed your fanfics! So glad you figured your writing style out <3 The one thing I love about all your fanfics is that, no matter what emotion you're trying to portray, you always manage to keep the characters' personalities in tact, and I could definitely see this happening with them.

One of the main things that attracted me to loving the HitsuHina pairing so much is that they have such a bittersweet relationship about them, and it's not predictable, like most of the pairings I've seen in anime, and you did a wonderful job of showing that in this. I hope you'll be able to figure your other fanfic out, and finish it up, cause I love your writing style, and there are very few HitsuHina writers out there that manage to keep me interested, all the while not ruining the personalities of the characters <3

[blue_crystal_9]

Thank you very much. ♥ Characterization is one of the things I always worry about, so I'm glad you thought that I kept their personalities in tact. :)

[afteriwake]

NO! NO! Not pathetic! Oh, this was so beautiful and touching. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel now, I really am.

[blue_crystal_9]

Thank you. :) The sequel should be out in a few days, I think, as I'm nearly finished writing it. :)

[nagasasu]

LOL, that "logically" of Hitsugaya's had me thinking of Spock. Love that Hinamori surprised him by asking why he loves her.

“I will wait. For however long it takes.” WAFF!
“Just… let me know… when you are ready.” I love how he's all awkward and hesitant and... more WAFF!
“Because I have nothing else to give you, yet.” Love that line. Also love the interaction in the paragraph after this.

Lovely fic, and I even enjoyed the author's note. ^^ Looking forward to the sequel! :D

[blue_crystal_9]

Lol, I'm actually a Spock/Star Trek fangirl, and I never realized the connection until you mentioned it... ;)

Thank you muchly. ♥ Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed the author's note, as I'm never sure if people actually read those things. :3

[nagasasu]

Hey another Star Trek fan! XD

I always read author's notes! They're fun to read. I do wonder if people ever read mine though, lol.

[taegan_kel]

Lovely fic~! I am really looking forward to the sequel now. This is a lovely, wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing. :D

[blue_crystal_9]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it. The sequel should be out pretty soon. :)