Valentine's Day Challenge Fic

Feb 20, 2009 19:17

Not Meant to Be

by Elizabeth

Rated M

Pairing:  Andy/Lily

This is a Vday Challenge Fic for duwinter  Hope you like it sweetie.

Prompt:  Andy/Lily: Spring break in Dunn's River Falls, Jamaica. Angsty can have a happy ending, but not required if it's more powerful without it. Some sensuality.

Disclaimer:  I don't own the Devil Wears Prada.

A/N:  Not meant to be by ( Read more... )

fanfiction, dwp andy/lily

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Comments 27

chainofclovers February 21 2009, 05:29:33 UTC
I've never read a story with this pairing before, and I thought you did a wonderful job. I got the strong sense that Lily felt really stuck in her role as Andy's friend, even if she wanted to be there...you communicated her feelings incredibly well.

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blue_eyed_devil February 21 2009, 17:09:53 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you liked it as I adore your writing.

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punky_96 February 21 2009, 07:56:39 UTC
wow. that left me speechless. lily sure sold herself short.
and andy needed to figure a lot of things out to finally get back around.
thanks for sharing a wonderful and unexpected story!

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blue_eyed_devil February 21 2009, 17:10:50 UTC
Thank you punky for your comment. Lily has self esteem issues it seems.

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duwinter February 21 2009, 09:59:42 UTC
The only thing I can say is WOW! You touched the spirit of my prompt. I'd not really thought of Andy/Lily as a pairing but it certainly was within the parameters I'd set in my prompt and it certainly fits. Beautifully done. Just the right amount of angst and a hopeful ending. You words flow almost like verse and draw the reader on. The feelings you express are palpable. It was a wonderful gift you've given me, and from an author who's work I truly admire. Thank you dear lady. It was a rare treat to read this story and know it was written for me.

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blue_eyed_devil February 21 2009, 17:22:58 UTC
*blushes* Your comments are so sweet and lovely. I can't tell you how glad I am that you like it. No matter how many comments or people who like it, I wanted it to be special for you. I feel so lucky to have written the story, so thank you for the idea.

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unfortunateggs February 21 2009, 10:23:12 UTC
This was a very well put together story, dalink. :)

Thanks for sharing, very muchly. I would normally never read this pairing, but as you write it, I did. Well done.

You could probably expand the actual story if you wanted to, and certainly write a sequel.

Yay you!!! :) More of this sort of thing!

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blue_eyed_devil February 21 2009, 17:12:43 UTC
Purr.... Comments from you always feel like a warm hug or someone rubbing my head. :) I'll think about sequel, but I'm looking at other projects, so I think I'll leave lily/andy to other writers. Mmmmm..... still purring. ;)

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flitterbug18 February 21 2009, 14:50:36 UTC
oooo I really liked this pairing...I didn't think I would be as I was reading it sucked me in within seconds. It was heartbreaking when Lilly had to walk away and I felt a sudden surge of hatred towards Nate...i was like noooo!!! and how could Andy have gotten back with nate

but yay for the little bit of hope at the ending!! you wrote this really well bubs I enjoyed it very much

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blue_eyed_devil February 21 2009, 17:15:32 UTC
Thanks for reading my fic flit, even though you didn't think you'd like the paring. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I think Andy was overwhelmed with the night she spent with Lily, and then to have Lily just dismiss it so callously she just felt like she had to go back to Nate. Sad but probably typical behavior. Yeah the ending needed a little hope.

Thanks for your comment. *hugs*

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