Where Every Heartbeat Creates A Tiny Void Inside

Apr 18, 2011 14:33

Title: Where Every Heartbeat Creates A Tiny Void Inside
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Genre: Drabble; Angst, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own them in my delusional world. :)
Warning: character death.
Summary: When pain marks the progression of deterioration and leads to the birth of the void; a half empty shell.
Beta: paradigm_twist
A/N: I have absolutely no idea what I'm ( Read more... )

drabble, angst, character: donghae, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, romance, character: eunhyuk

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blue_mori April 18 2011, 06:55:32 UTC
paradigm_twist April 18 2011, 06:56:38 UTC
:DDDD comment later. Laundry first ;)

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paradigm_twist April 18 2011, 09:10:54 UTC
BACK.

First stop, I'd like to tell you. YES. THE THEME OF THE PROMPT IS IN THIS :D Don't know what you're worried about :) And yes. YOU CAN WRITE ANGST. You just needed motivation. It's a good thing I came up with this. You've done good.

The ending. With the hospital bed and the final goodbye! T-T it's so sad. painful even :/

But you! Your payback is just so painful @.@

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blue_mori April 19 2011, 03:27:34 UTC
I'M OBVIOUSLY SLACKING AGAIN @__@

Seriously this fic gave me a hard time. I even dreamt about EunHae one night because i was too engrossed with this thing. AIYOH.

I SO CANNOT WRITE ANGST. that is YOUR forte. :3 I like READING angst. WRITING them is a whole new different thing. LOL. Well at least I tried, HAHAHA. :)

The ending wasn't exactly how i wanted it to be. I wanted a happier ending but then again, if Donghae survived, there will be no void left. LOL. SORRY HAE. D:

YES MY PAYBACK. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOURS. But you have nothing to be worried about. I'm facing the SAME problem as you. NEVER experienced love before in my life, you think i can write romance? XD MATI TOGETHER is what I said. :) ILY.

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blue_mori April 19 2011, 03:35:38 UTC
HELLO. /WAVES Thanks for reading this seriously.

Yes i killed Hae. ;A; SORRY. It had to be done. /stabs self

You have no idea how happy you made me with your comment. Saying this is beautiful makes me want to hug you right now. :) Truly appreciate it even though I know I need A LOT of improvement. <3

YES SOOK KWAN. I think I need a while to make her realize that. ;__; You don't know how long it took me to convince her to step into the world of fanfic. D: HAHAHA.

Again, thanks for reading! :) ILY.

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eiarim April 18 2011, 16:48:35 UTC
Aww for the love of eunhae;I just couldn't restrain myself from shedding this tears.I knew sth must have been wrong with hae but this is worst;A; H-He's dying;~;

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blue_mori April 19 2011, 03:38:59 UTC
Hey there! ;)

/hands you tissues.

Yes. The worst thing I can do to break up wonderful Eunhae is kill one of them off. /feels guilty Sorry. I don't know what I was thinking. D: I think I need to write another happier fic for them to compensate this. LOL.

But thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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eunhyuk_jewel April 19 2011, 10:37:54 UTC
SPOT!

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