The Scars in the Braille (3/?)

[blueberrytaffy]

Title: The Scars in the Braille
Pairing: baekhyun/chanyeol, various side parings
Length: chaptered (3/?)
Rating: pg-13
Summary: A story told through the eyes of their classmates and relatives, this is the rare and ultimately twisted romance of Park Chanyeol, a boy that suffers from a severe facial deformation, and Byun Baekhyun, a little genius who

Comments

[blueberrytaffy]

i love u

[ribbonsong]

One thing I really love about this series you have here is how heartfelt everything feels. Your characters have their own differing personalities, their own reasons for doing what they do. If Kris had been the one to have rescued Chanyeol, his choice of action and reasoning would have been completely different from Baekhyun's. It even shows in the way you word each point of view; none of them speak exactly the same, think in similar thought patterns, feel the same set of emotions and it's really effective for the choice of storytelling you've employed! I also love how human your characters are. Take Baekhyun's mother for instance: she only cares about Baekhyun when she gets to the hospital because he's her child, why should she care about anybody else? Normally it would be courteous to wonder about the state of Baekhyun's friend, but no mother is going to sideline the health of her child to ask about someone she doesn't know. Her fear, frustration, and exasperation with Baekhyun is so on point

[snazzykaz]

thIS HURTS ME AND IT BURNS BUT I LOVE IT OH MAN. can't wait for the next chapter