Boku no Yakuza Aijin, Final Part

[bluebirdsongs]

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[insalia]

It was really fun to read a story from the point of view of a girl. Remind me of myself when I look people around me and try to imagine their life. But I'm not as imaginative as Sachiko!

It's fun to see kame as a yakusa during all the fic and discover at the end that he's not.

I really enjoy reading this. Thanks ^^

[bluebirdsongs]

x3 I'm glad you liked her~ She is one of us, and I was definitely speaking from experience when I wrote some of her parts in the story, so it's really easy for me to relate to her, too. =) But yeah, what I wouldn't give for even just a little of her imagination and her drawing skills! ^^;

8D I think that twist at the end is one of my favorite parts of the whole fic. Glad to see you enjoyed it. x3

Thank you so much for reading and commenting~! <3

Boku no Yakuza Aijin, Final Part

[agustin1982]

SPOT!!!!!!

Boku no Yakuza Aijin, Final Part

[agustin1982]

Yatta! UkeJin, my favorite xD Kame as yakuza and waiter Jin~ this story so interesting and awesome xD I LOVE IT^^ Thank you for write this fics, thats amazing xD **give you hugs**

Re: Boku no Yakuza Aijin, Final Part

[bluebirdsongs]

*hugged* x3 Thank you~ I'm so glad you liked it. <3

[chiseen]

Elaborate and nicely thought-out plot. I really enjoyed reading it!! I, too, wish there was more!! How the real Kame and Jin's lives are. I would totally buy that doujin. XDD

For some reason, after reading this, I keep thinking Kame with extensive back tattoos would be REALLY hot. *_____*

This was gooooood~
I love good long fics~ Yum~! LOL!

Not sure if I was able to express all my enthusiasm here as I'm kinda lost for words, but this was all sorts of awesome. =D

Loved it! Thanks for writing and posting!!!

[sou_kiri]

*sneaks in*
You 8D I was going to link you to this next time we talked. I'm really glad you saw it x3;

[bluebirdsongs]

8D Thank you! Lol, when I first started writing this fic, one thing I considered doing was including a companion piece that shows what really happened leading up to the scenes that Sachiko saw in the café, instead of what she imagined happening. For example, when Jin almost gave Sachiko the receipt with the note on it, he was apologizing for barging into Photographer!Kame's darkroom and accidentally exposing some of his pictures, which is why Kame didn't come to the café for a while and why he was extra mean to Jin when he was there. x3; I don't know if I'll get around to writing it, but I'm still kicking the idea around in the back of my head...We'll see~

x33 He is~ <3

8D Thank you. Thank you so much. <3 x3

[sou_kiri]

WHY WAS I NOT TOLD ABOUT THIS ;_;
Jin's heading to Kame's studio right now. He wants to be bullied a little ;3;

[lovepilovejin]

pretty long enough for one-shot...but still awesome...i liked the plot...
thank you for sharing it~~

[bluebirdsongs]

Haha, yeah, I'm still in awe over how long it actually got. In hindsight, I probably should have split it up into chapters and posted it that way... Oh well, too late now. ><

x3 But thank you for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! <3

[lovepilovejin]

I thought this is a multi-chapter~~but for one-shot, it is so long~~but still interesting~~

u r welcome XXD

[bluebirdsongs]

^^; Yeah...I think I posted it as a one-shot because when I was writing it, I intended for it all to be read at once, but I didn't take into consideration just how long it would take to read it, so chapters would have been more practical. Lol, newbie mistake~ At least I'll know for next time. =)

[eragon22]

OMG, what was this thing that I just read. It´s about 2 am here, i have to be up in less than 5 hours and instead of going to sleep, I am sitting in front of my laptop, my mouth opened and trying to write out a comment that won´t make me seem like a complete idiot

[bluebirdsongs]

Ohhh, I wish I had time to respond to this now, because your comment is all kinds of awesome, but sadly, I have to get ready to go to work. =( I'll come back to this later, though. Oh, but don't worry, you don't come across as a lunatic at all. xDD In fact, this is exactly the kind of comment I love~ I can't tell you how good it made me feel when I read it. x3 Thank you so much for that. <3

But yes, proper response to come later~ 8D;

[bluebirdsongs]

Finally, I have some time~ Now, where to start? x3

Guh, I don't even know what to say in response. I'm humbled. That my fic could warrant such a reaction from you is just...awesome. Thank you. Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. <3