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bluechicki

To be, you can only be with one, Ch 13

Oct 14, 2009 10:21

Title: To be, you can only be with one Ch 13

Rating: MA- for language

Summary: After the tragic events of episode 104- Silvia wakes up and it's not what she is expecting...

A/N- Ok, so here's the next chapter...It's kinda a filler but kinda not... unsure how to explain??? *scratches head* Um, maybe just read it??

I want to dedicate this chapter to ( Read more... )

fanfiction: to be you can only be with o, rating: ma, fanfiction

Comments 35

av8rwinn October 14 2009, 00:09:48 UTC

Wow! Deep breath. Wow. Pepa is going throguh shot this week in fanfic work. Can't wait to read more soon. Deep breath wow. Pepa is so honest and straight up as always. Awesome.

qosmio18 October 14 2009, 00:57:15 UTC

Amen Av8rwinn, Pepa is not having a good fic week. Lol And also Pepa is so honest and straight up as always. Seriously that's why I adore her character, there's no B.S. when it comes to how she feels about Silvia.

Blue, great job. I'm in a glass case of emotion.

I love the fact that Pepa hang cuff herself to Silvia instead of watching her leave. I never liked that. I'm always screaming at my computer scene "Com'on Pepa, run after her. Don't let her go! Arghhh! >:/"

Can't wait to see how DL reacts to a his daughter cuffed to her wife. Hehehehe!

av8rwinn October 14 2009, 01:47:36 UTC

Q., How r u? I miss ya. I've been cringing for Pepa this whole week. I swear these awesome fic writers must get together and tease us readers. It's a conspiracy. Maybe soon they will smut us all. Silvia giving Pepa he much deserved loving.

qosmio18 October 14 2009, 03:02:26 UTC

Av. Hey dear heart. I've missed you as well. I'm good. How r u?

OMG I think we do need some good smut. But then again I really don't need a reason to crave for more smut. ;p

But seriously Pepa has been put to the ringer. Lol and frown at same time.

Thread 11

swiftlyreloaded October 14 2009, 05:24:40 UTC

this is really good, but man damn cliffhangers

bluechicki October 14 2009, 06:55:35 UTC

Sorry swiftly, i really wanted to write more to this one but i ran outta time...thus the cliffy *hangs head*
I will update soon and try not to leave it as a cliffy... thanks for you comment and sticking with me though *smiles* :D
Oh... and i haven't forgotten about the smackdown either... itsa coming ... a bit later on *grins*

swiftlyreloaded October 14 2009, 16:25:53 UTC

YIPPEEEEE blue diden't forget trala la la la a smackdown is a comin la la la .....

mauders October 14 2009, 07:16:12 UTC

awwww I loved every part of this chapter.
Go Pepa....

bluechicki October 14 2009, 09:03:49 UTC

Aww...thanks for your comment mauders.. glad you loved it hun, like i said i was hoping to make it longer but ran outta time...Yay, i concur go Pepa :DD

em_bec October 14 2009, 08:06:38 UTC

this is my fav chapter so far :) i just wanted more! ur doing such a fantastic job with this story, can't wait for your next post xoxo

bluechicki October 14 2009, 09:06:03 UTC

Wow, that's nice to hear em_bec *grins*...i was kinda not happy with it and had to stop without finishing it so i'm so glad you liked it. Hopefully more in next couple of days, got some free time coming up :D

girlechick October 14 2009, 11:19:01 UTC

Pepa doing the dirty with her ex!? *gasp*
I didn't see that coming. Sounds like this Marta is a bit of a bunny boiler. Pepa and Silvia should really watch their backs!
Great chapter bluechicki! I will be waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.

bluechicki October 15 2009, 09:31:52 UTC

Thanks for your comments girlechicky,
i know, i know....*shakes head* i hate the idea of Pepa with anyone but Silvia too... believe me... but when i thought about it, Pepa was alone for 5 years and i just thought it was more realistic that she hooked up on occasion ... even if it was without emotional attachment :(

*Sounds like this Marta is a bit of a bunny boiler.* lol i couldn't agree more...:DD