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Title: PepSi Challenge: Primer Añon de PepSi - Chapter 14

Oct 28, 2009 23:00

Title: PepSi Challenge: Primer Añon de PepSi - Chapter 14

Rating: NC-17

A/N- So here is my addition to the PepSi challenge…I figured they are on vacation so they should be up to hanky panky as often as they can: D….Not exactly sure if it fits in with the story but oh well *shrugs and looks around innocently* Anyway thanks to Qos for the last awesome ( Read more... )

Title: PepSi Challenge: Primer Añon de P, rating : nc-17

Comments 14

selinakris October 28 2009, 20:10:13 UTC

great stuff. loved the fact that the 3 men were in the next room during bathroom smut, lol.

bluechicki October 30 2009, 08:42:22 UTC

lol... thanks selinakris, well do you think they knew what was going on? Hmmm, probably...but at least they didn't interrupt them...yay.. *big smile*

junebuggy01 October 28 2009, 22:17:55 UTC

Fantastic addition to this fic Chicki! I love that you wrote a bit about Julio and his disgusting hotel room. I like that part a lot actually. Kinda made me shiver in a bad way.

But what made me shiver in a good way? The sexy time! The sexy time was so fucking hot! Like, seriously! I loved it! Smut where they have to quiet themselves in order to continue?!? Probably the hottest of them all and with your writing talent, It just multiplied the hotness by a billion! *Sighs contently* Awesome

bluechicki October 30 2009, 08:39:23 UTC

After Qos's last chapter i got this image in my head about Julio so i just wanted to add it in there *shrugs* ....glad you liked that bit hun coz i wasn't totally sure about it :DD
Ok, so the sexy time got you over the bad shiver, it did me too juney.....and i have to agree like 100 percent, *Smut where they have to quiet themselves in order to continue?!? Probably the hottest of them all*...HELL YEAH!!! Thanks for your comments, you never cease to put a smile on my face guapa :DD

qosmio18 October 29 2009, 01:58:58 UTC

“Pepa, I want you to promise me that when we do, when we catch this bastard, we will finish our vacation; somewhere secluded, without mobile phones or investigations or interruptions of any kind.” she smiled as she embraced Pepa; whispering into her ear, “Just you and me Pepa, you and me!” Iiiiitttt rrrreeemmmmiiiinnndddddeeed meee of (OMG can't caught my breath) episode fucking 104 when Silvia was talking about their honeymoon. Can I tell you how much I fucking hated episode 104. But I loved chapt 14.

Pepa and Silvia got some booty. They got some booty! The bathroom scene makes me think of the 90's R&B group CMB "Sex you up"

Blue you said you were gonna come through with some smutty smut time and yes you delivered.

Great chapter. Now I'm glad I CAME before you because I don't think I could've given as much length and details that cover every inch like you did. You such a thoughtful lover...uh uh I mean writer. ;DD you're my girl BLUE!

bluechicki October 30 2009, 08:10:45 UTC

Awwww....Qos, I am so sorry guapa for reminding you of ep 104....*runs up and gives you a huge hug ... and i'm not letting go till you feel better!*
Well i did say it didn't i... I haven't written hardly any smut in my whole life so i am still learning....practice makes perfect right *grins* but now i gotta get back into 'to be' mode....
*The bathroom scene makes me think of the 90's R&B group CMB "Sex you up"* scratches head* hmmm...really? lmao, i renmember that song, you crack me up Qos :DD
BTW...I'm glad you came before me too, you creatively laid the ground work..... and i do like to *cover every inch*...Hmm, if that means i am a thoughtful... writer then i'll take it *winks* ...:P
Hope your not working too hard honey :D

angie005 October 29 2009, 03:20:58 UTC

Don't these 2 ladies get tired of each other? I would have to say NO!! lol

Great chapter!! I'm sure Lovely will think of something to take off your ending.

bluechicki October 30 2009, 08:32:03 UTC

No, No, No.....these two ladies never grow tired of each other, not in my world anyway *grins*
Thanks for your comments angie, I'm sure lovely will too :DD

pantherwalks October 29 2009, 22:09:29 UTC

Hi, bluechicki.
Wow! I really admire, how you write it in so much detail. And the Julio part is kinda scary, it gives me goosebumps.

Awesome chapter! :)

bluechicki October 30 2009, 08:30:13 UTC

Hey pantherwalks, Wow, thankyou *smiles*
After the last chapter i kinda got this image in my head of Julio being a psycho serial killer...so i was kinda going for scary...but making up for it with the lovin at the end :P
Thanks for commenting :DD