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bluechicki

To be you can only be with one Ch 19

Mar 02, 2010 21:47

Title: To be you can only be with one Chapter 19.

Rating: MA

Summary: After the tragic events of episode 104- Silvia wakes up and it's not what she is expecting...
A/N- Sorry it took so long between updates. RL busy ...................... and i miss the pelirroja :(

Hmm, It is sad to watch Pepa without her and it's hard to get motivated to write.... ( Read more... )

fan fic, to be you can only be with one, pepa y silvia

Comments 31

vickiheartpepsi March 2 2010, 11:29:17 UTC

what a sexy chapter!!!! xP except for that mini prank u pulled xD
i loved it...i love pepsi!!!!!!! :D...sorry,if nothing makes sense,it's because i'm abit high xP
but..yea :) i loved it!! :D

bluechicki March 3 2010, 10:27:16 UTC

lol...sorry vicki, i just couldn't help myself about the 'mini prank'.....:DD
Um, won't ask what you're a bit high on...hope it's life *wink* but of course it makes sense. Glad you loved it and thanks for commenting hun .....btw, i love Pepsi too :DDD

vickiheartpepsi March 3 2010, 10:59:15 UTC

:D
well i hope u update soon!!so i can stay in my PepSi lala land:) and yes...i was high on life xD

bluechicki March 3 2010, 11:11:17 UTC

I hope to update soon, so we both can stay in pepsi lala land :D....and i gotta tell ya hun, that's a great place to be, in pepsi lala land and high on life *big smile*

pepsilove64 March 2 2010, 13:07:20 UTC

Great chapter thank you, I loved it. I miss Silvia too.
But we get to have her in these great fanfics
So happy that Marta went home to pack lol

bluechicki March 3 2010, 10:38:41 UTC

Si, i agree pepsilove....it is awesome that we still have these great fan fics to 'live vicariously' through *smiles* lol.....
*I miss Silvia too* Aww, sending ya a big hug...it's so sad to see Pepa without her....it doesn't feel like the same show anymore :(

Anyways, I think that will be the last we see of Marta. Thanks for commenting and i'm really glad you loved it :DD

trickydaos March 2 2010, 16:48:53 UTC

Holy shit, I love this fiery pelirroja! O.o
And damn it! I almost got a heart attack when I thought this chapter was gonna end in a cliffy. Thank godness all is well now *throws you cookie*.

“If anything happens to MY WIFE I am going to kill you! You hear me….? You are a fucking DEAD woman Marta?”

Do you need any volunteer, Pepa?
Seriously, I was quite annoyed with Marta already. But when THAT happened...I snapped. No one mess with my,-er, Pepa's Silvia!

Thank you for this great chapter!

bluechicki March 3 2010, 11:23:29 UTC

Hey tricky, i love the fiery redhead too.....*catches cookie and munches it up* thanks hun. Hmm, well if i'm getting cookies i will have to finish all the chapters i can on a good note..*nods*
If you wanna volunteer...i dunno if Pepa would need one, i think Pepa would kill her with her bare hands if anything happened to her pelirroja after she just got her back....well then if that was the case, she would probably go to prison so if Silvia did make it by some miracle then she would need someone to 'comfort' her maybe...maybe that's what you could do for your,- er i mean Pepa's Silvia, you think???? hehehe...(sorry rambling)
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment tricky, sorry about the fake ending thing *hangs head* just a bit of a prank, glad you liked it anyways :D

girlechick March 2 2010, 17:48:28 UTC

Holy shit on a stick!!! That was better than watching WWE!
Whoop! Go Silvia!!
Even though Marta has a few screws loose, I kinda feel sorry for her and I dunno why.
Silvia looked up at Pepa, her face grimaced in pain, her expression unreadable, “Um, where am I? Who are you?”
You scared the shit out of there! I thought that Pepa had lost her pelirroja!
Great chapter Bluechicki! SO can't flippin' wait to read more!!

bluechicki March 3 2010, 11:34:24 UTC

*Holy shit on a stick!!! That was better than watching WWE!* lol you cracked me up girle...I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for commenting *huge smiles*

Err, sorry about that whole "Um, where am I? Who are you?" thing hun. i didn't mean to scare the shit outta ya ....it kinda just came to me when i was writing.... and i went with it *hangs head*
but, I actually can't wait to write more....this chappy was a lotta fun to write so i hope to have more updates soon xDD

foot_print_1 March 2 2010, 19:06:09 UTC

who the fuck does Marta think she is, indeed. That woman is seriously disturbed and deserves to rot in Hell. Hitting Silvia.. Why, I oughta!
If she doesn’t leave, I'll have to kick her ass. Even the fact that she's not an actual person wouldn't stop me!

bluechicki March 3 2010, 10:48:58 UTC

Wow, foot_print, *That woman is seriously disturbed and deserves to rot in Hell* hehehe...tell me how you really feel hun...
I know, i know *shakes head*....hitting Silvia, wtf right...but Silvia can give as good as she gets, Marta played dirty there at the end... :D
I'll join you if she doesn't leave, yeah even if she isn't a real person .... we'll kick her ass all the way back to Seville or whatever 'hole' she crawled out of...I better get training, you know... just in case *grins*.
Thanks for commenting foot_print, you left a huge smile on my face...gracias :DD