Untitled: A Spontaneous Fic

[bluecyan]

Pairing: D/S.

Rating: R.

Word Count: 2, 096.

Disclaimer: I do not own anything except my brain and the hands I use for typing.

Author's Note: This story came out of nowhere. I said to myself I wouldn't write smut involving these two until they are legal of age, so this is all a bit awkward and hastingly made. Uhm, let's just pretend they're 18 in

Comments

[xcinamonx]

AAAH That was great! I'm really glad you decided to write this. And you are NOT a sucky writer, okay? You're fantastic, really. And I love how you made Demi wear the sneakers :)

[bluecyan]

Lol. My mind's numb right now. Ugh. Thanks, Kanel. You're very persuasive...I was about to choose Ragnarok than writing. XD

[xcinamonx]

Oh, writing was definitely the way to go. :)

[makemebelive]

This was so awesome! And like Kanel said, you're absolutely not a sucky writer. Seriously, I dream of being even half as good as this. Ah, and the sneakers of love are mentioned, niiiice. lol

[bluecyan]

meh. got a lot to learn. fanfic's not the same as writing a term paper. lo.

thanks, Niki. XD

[makemebelive]

Hah. Well either way I found it great.

You're welcome, Blue. xD

[lastchance_197]

okay WOW

You really cheered me up with this one!

I was seriously upset about Demi/Selena not having a sleepover tonight... and the thought that THIS could have happened today, just WOW *swoons*

This was first of all, FUCKING HOT.

Second of all, VERY well written, so BOO YOU for saying you are a mediocre writer, that's nonsense!

Selena entered her with caution, not knowing if to expect acceptance or not. When Demi opened her legs wider to receive what Selena has to offer fully, Selena pressed herself fully onto Demi, wanting the other girl feel all the emotions running through her. With every thrusts Selena gave, she whispered ‘I love you’ to Demi’s ear, and with every jerk Demi’s hips make to meet Selena’s fingers buried deep within her, Selena comes undone with how much she loves her.

-- This part was SO beautiful, like it actually made me tear.

GOOD JOB BUDDY! :D

[bluecyan]

LMFAO. Now we know why Selena's not invited to the sleepover. She needs Demi to tell Miley alone that Demi's not interested in dating Trace. XD

Thanks, mate. XD

[sole_knightley]

You are definitely NOT a sucky writer!
The smut was SOOO hot! Really, like.. wow!
I love hot makeup sex, and u wrote it very well.

Best line: The raven-haired minx felt how wound up Demi was though, and as it’s her mission in life to pleasure her best friend in any way she can
So cute!!

And the sneakers are LOVE!

[bluecyan]

OBRIGADA, AMIGA (did I say that right?). :D

[sole_knightley]

LOL
Yes, u did!! U win bonus points for that!!

Ur welcome. ;)

[ex_alittlel]

because you are not slutty at all, at all, by tweeting about this. READING

[bluecyan]

why hello, pot...i'm kettle, also black. lol. it's not as good as yours, kiddo. XD

[ex_alittlel]

awwwwwwwwww
this was so fucking hot and adorable and cute and omg i loved the ending.

[sorry i cannot form a REAL comment. sorry.]

[bluecyan]

thanks, kiddo. it would have been better if Alana helped me. lol. XD