Comments | bluedepths: Indivisible

bluedepths

Indivisible

Jun 13, 2007 20:05

I wrote this fan fiction AGES ago, but I haven't posted it on LJ, so I thought I would give it a go. Just to let you know, the first chapters aren't the best I've written (HAHA), but they get better, and longer, as this is the first R/M story I've written ( Read more... )

chapter 1, indivisible

Comments 6

moonspell4 June 13 2007, 22:11:19 UTC

Interesting but use a larger font.... that one is really small....

bluedepths July 16 2007, 18:43:07 UTC

I'm glad! The next chapter is in a bigger font, as I'm just beginning to get used to all the LJ features and don't know my way around yet. :)

iweep4you June 14 2007, 14:48:54 UTC

OMG THAT WAS SOOOOOO GOOD! I HOPE MARISSA IS PREGNANT! : ) AND EWWWWW! LINDSEY LINDSEY? AND TREY TERY?! EWWW BLAH BARF! PLEASE POOST MORE SOON!!!!

bluedepths July 16 2007, 18:45:11 UTC

They aren't exactly your typical couple, to say the least! Just posted the 5th chapter!

Amazing! anonymous July 16 2007, 18:08:20 UTC

That was absolutely amazing and well... hot!!!!! Poor Trey..... although I hate him, I feel 4 him. LINDSEY?!!!!!! Can't wait 4 an update! POST ASAP!!!!!

Re: Amazing! bluedepths July 16 2007, 18:47:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm never really satisfied with my writing, but it's great knowng it gets appreciated! LOL, yes Trey could have chosen a better partner, and they are extremely different, but I find that intriguing, because there are so many possibilities!