brigits_flame june.1

[bluegodjanus]

So after a 6-7 month break, I'm finally returning to competition in brigits_flame. Strangely, I joined the community because I thought weekly prompts would get me writing more. Instead, I simply stopped participating when I (insert excuse here). Now I'm back, largely due to a desire to hammer out more of my mad wordsmithing. This week's prompt is "fugue refugee

Comments

[oryginal_skin]

Hmm.... I like what you have here, and I understand the need to be mysteriously minimalist... but a little more is needed to really tease the reader into peak interest.

Lots of potential here -- and lots suggested. Is this connected to a larger work of yours?