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New Fic: Undisguised

Sep 29, 2009 23:07

Title: Undisguised
Author: blueheronz
Pairing: House and Cameron
Rating: Mature for sexual content
Category: Romance. Smut. Halloween fic. Prompt fic based on the word, "cross."
Betas: 0penhearts and athousandsmiles
Dedication: For vicodin_martini with thanks ( Read more... )

undisguised, fanfic

Comments 35

fanohugh September 30 2009, 03:48:23 UTC

WOW!!! I don't know what else to say...just...WOW!!! You write very, very well.

blueheronz October 2 2009, 14:27:59 UTC

Thanks so much!

athousandsmiles September 30 2009, 03:48:49 UTC

*thud*

The additions are beautiful, and the sex is both hot and romantic.

This part...

“Everyone else, maybe, but you? I always thought you’d come for me. Thought you’d see through me. Thought you’d know that I never mean what I say.”

is heartbreaking. But you fix it all in the end. Lovely lovely work, Reka.

blueheronz October 2 2009, 14:30:39 UTC

Thanks, Kelly. And thanks for reading it in advance and listening to my thoughts about it.

So I emailed you this week and our joint email account is still semi-spammed, the result being that the email and several others I tried to send are stuck in my outbox. I'll send it to you using gmail this weekend. Grrr.

hughville September 30 2009, 03:53:23 UTC

Perfect!

blueheronz October 2 2009, 14:31:09 UTC

Grazi!

Love that icon, m'dear.

0penhearts September 30 2009, 04:12:05 UTC

"just what you need to get through the latest blow to our ship."

Oh, so true, darling :)

Can't wait to work on something with you again! :)

blueheronz October 2 2009, 14:32:00 UTC

Thank you. Can't wait to work with you again! We have to write something together soon ...

sharp2799 September 30 2009, 04:43:07 UTC

This is such a wonderful balm to my heart, even while I want to say damn you for getting me hot and bothered and no guy nearby! And toys don't cuddle. :P

Feedback from an amp and the squeal of a guitar were followed by an impromptu rendition of the theme song from Scooby Doo.

LOL!

He was the dish on the menu she always had to order.

Her hunger is such a pulsing thing. It's a perfect catalyst to make her do this.

"I'm waiting," he said when she continued to ignore his need for talk. To prove it, his finger remained still, pressed against her clit, the lightest promise of more seeping from its warmth. She felt herself open up and spread her legs wider for him. "You shouldn't have. Waited. For me, for this."

The torture they put each other through is like a vibrating string being tightened oh-so-slowly.

SO wonderful.

blueheronz October 2 2009, 14:32:50 UTC

Thanks for reading and for your always insightful comments.