Comments | blueheronz: HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHRISSY!

blueheronz

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHRISSY!

Aug 03, 2010 23:57

A H/Cam Birthday ficlet for fated_addiction. Happy Birthday, C. You deserve an epic, Big Bang sized fic. Maybe someday. At any rate, I hope the birthday was smashing. I'm sure you lit up the town like Christmas lights.

( time will tell you nothing but i told you so )

time will tell you nothing but i told yo, birthday greetings, fic, fanfic

Comments 14

sharp2799 August 4 2010, 05:09:47 UTC

A very happy birthday to fated_addiction!

Wow. This was a serious case in the story yet showed strength, depth, and hotness between House and Cameron. They really understand each other and play off each other so well.

endlesswonder August 4 2010, 06:55:49 UTC

I want to say something terribly insightful, but my brain is being pathetic. Just know that it was absolutely beautiful and hot and angsty but hopeful, and this line - "If it was me in that bed, you're the one I'd want," he says, pulling your hair back into its ponytail. - is my favourite. And the Lost line made me giggle.

enots August 4 2010, 07:27:54 UTC

Why you would apologise for this, I do not know? Its just beautiful. A future moment plucked from your personal canon. I love the sentence about hearing the heart beat within his muscled abdomen. It creates such a familiarity. And the descriptions of her dress. The student. The geography of cancer.

Yummy.

vicodin_martini August 4 2010, 09:12:56 UTC

so beautiful. You are such a good writer, you must give yourself much more credit for this! I love how they talk to one another, it's all in that glorious chemistry I miss so much, but you captured it again. <33

Happy birthday fated_addiction!!

maybebaby1280 August 4 2010, 13:03:53 UTC

I simply adore this. It's poetic and bittersweet, angsty without being depressing, and dead-on House and Cameron perfection. I love Cameron's strength in the face of death, so different from her season 1 hesitation. I love her teaching style, love that House watches her, love that she's ever aware of his presence.

This part especially moved me:
Other people matter less. This is what you want. Not an alter and an aisle and a gown. Not promises. Promises end. You want the now. Oh, god. You want this...

And this was my absolute favorite line:
His breath; your breath.
Such a short, succinct little sentence, but it speaks volumes.

Really, really beautiful.