Fic: The Unofficial Lima Welcome Wagon (Glee, Puck/Finn/Sam, Puck/Finn)

Oct 23, 2010 02:01

Title: The Unofficial Lima Welcome Wagon
Pairing: Puck/Finn/Sam, established Puck/Finn
Rating: R
Word Count: ~4800
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: When Puck and Finn take Sam to a bar to welcome him to Lima, their welcoming committee ends up a bit more hands on than expected.
A/N: Written for becca_radcgg from a prompt she left me for the one sentence meme. ( Read more... )

fic, glee, puck/finn/sam, puck/finn

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shizam_i_am October 23 2010, 19:13:16 UTC
O.M.G. MEGA SQUEEE JUST FLDSKAFDSAK. SO GOOD.

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bluejbird October 24 2010, 21:11:43 UTC
:D Thank you so much! I'm pleased you enjoyed it!

Thank you for reading!

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fandom_gal October 23 2010, 19:29:04 UTC
I love the little fill you you did for the meme so I was thrilled to see you extended it! Puck/Finn is my OTP but I also have a big fondness for Puck/Sam. Love how you incorporated all the boys! Very, very hot with Sam on his knees doing both of them. And I really liked how Sam can see that Finn loves Puck and that Puck's insults are just a cover for something else, plus the hints to Sam's backstory.

Puck licking Finn's hand was so wonderful as well as them kissing above Sam. Just great hints at a established relationship.

I was intrigued by this little line:

“It’s cool,” he says, patting Sam’s shoulder reassuringly. “Puck knows the guy on the door. I think he cleans his pool or something.”

Has Puck's "pool-cleaning" business gone coed? I love the visual of that if it's so. But then I really have a kink for Puck/casual prostitution.

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bluejbird October 24 2010, 21:15:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! You know how much I love Puck/Finn but throwing Sam in there too has been unexpectedly much more fun than I thought!

I'm glad you liked the hints of the established relationship between Finn and Puck- I guess in my head I like to think they're boyfriends who don't know it yet. :)

And idk, I think maybe Puck's pool cleaning business has been co-ed for a long time. He's in it for the money and the dudes pay well so it's not like it's gay or anything, right? ;)

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comment!

♥♥♥

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fandom_gal October 24 2010, 22:56:23 UTC
I think Sam fits in well with Puck and Finn...just 3 dudes who can be awkward and hot all at the same time!

Oh yeah, I love those hints at a relationship. They could go a long time not realizing they're actually "together" which makes it even more endearing.

Oh absolutely...if you get paid it doesn't matter if you're going down on some guy or he's doing ya...it's all totally a business transaction ;) Oh hooker!Puck, how I love you so.

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fuzzy_paint October 23 2010, 23:11:25 UTC
I've read this multiple times already, and still I'm struggling to come up with anything besides a resounding WOW. I just. WOW GURL.

This was pretty much all I could ever want in P/F/S fic. (And holy crap was it hot!)

I'm a sucker for backstory that isn't completely explained/detailed and this has it in spades. I love all the hints of what happened in Sam's past, the possible reasons why he moved in the first place, etc. I love the undercurrent of yearning for this unnamed guy.

This was wonderful! ♥

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bluejbird October 24 2010, 21:21:04 UTC
Thank you so much! Your comment really made me grin.

I'm really pleased you liked the vague backstory- I wasn't sure if that would translate well but I quite like keeping it vague, leaving it up to the reader to fill in the gaps if they want to, or just to catch glimpses of Sam's past in his memories.

I'm really so pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you for reading!

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beta_goddess October 24 2010, 15:34:23 UTC
Whew! Hot and fascinating and character-developing all at once. My OT3 is Puck/Finn/Rachel, but I love Puck/Finn/anybody and this was gorgeous. Also, what Fuzzy said about backstory is so true. Awesome.

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bluejbird October 24 2010, 21:25:20 UTC
I'm happy you liked it! Thanks so much for reading!

I'm glad you liked the backstory too. :)

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overstreets October 25 2010, 04:40:43 UTC
Wowww okay I LOVED this. Aside from it being supremely hot, it was also so rich in characterization. I loved how Finn and Puck's relationship was filtered through Sam's eyes and how we got to know that, YES, they do care about each other an awful lot. I loved Sam's backstory. The vagueness worked very well in making Sam's pain clear to the reader, if that makes any sense. I really just loved your Sam - he's got angst, but he's not completely overcome with it, and at the end we can see the hope of him finding a place to belong in his new town. SUPERRRRR fic, this is one of my all-time favorites.

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bluejbird October 28 2010, 09:20:49 UTC
Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the fic.

I'm glad you liked the vagueness of Sam's backstory too, and that the filtering of Finn and Puck's relationship through someone else's eyes worked for you.

Thank you so much for reading! :D

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